Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is quite good and natural, but it can be more concise and avoid slight redundancy. Try to directly answer the question first, then add specific supporting details with linking words to make it coherent.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Since childhood, my family's love for music exposed me to various genres, which inspired me to develop my singing skills.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Please use correct tense and complete your thoughts. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific details.

예시: Yes, I have been taking singing classes since I was five years old. I learned Hindustani classical music, which is a difficult genre, and this training has significantly improved my singing skills.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and a bit long. Try to make your point clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid filler words like 'Uh'.

예시: I want to sing for myself because it allows me to develop a unique style without worrying about the general public's preference for commercial music.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and lacks specific supporting details. Please complete your sentences and provide clear reasons with linking words to make your answer more effective.

예시: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and improve a skill over time, which gives a sense of achievement and joy.

× I have singing classes since I was five years old.

✓ I have had singing classes since I was five years old.

The sentence uses present perfect tense to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. The correct form is 'have had' to show the continuous nature from past to present, not just 'have'. This is a common error in tense usage.

× I went to learn Hindustani classical music which is a very difficult genre and that is boosted my singing skills significantly and now I am pretty good due to the classes that I.

✓ I went to learn Hindustani classical music, which is a very difficult genre, and that boosted my singing skills significantly. Now I am pretty good due to the classes that I took.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'is boosted' should be 'boosted' to correctly use past tense; the sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity at the end. Also, 'that is boosted' is incorrect because the action happened in the past. The corrected sentence uses past tense verbs and completes the thought properly.