Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için tekrar eden kelimelerden kaçının ve cümlenizi daha açık yapın. Örneğin, 'Kore' kelimesini iki kez tekrarlamak yerine, daha spesifik detaylar ekleyebilirsiniz.

예시: I love singing because it brings me joy. I especially enjoy singing loudly with my sisters when we are together in Korea.

제안: Cümlelerinizi daha net ve doğru yapıya kavuşturmak için dilbilgisi hatalarına dikkat edin ve cümleleri daha kısa ve anlamlı yapın. Ayrıca, destekleyici detaylarınızı bağlaçlarla birbirine bağlayın.

예시: No, I have never learned to sing because I think my voice is not good enough for a band. However, I enjoy singing alone at home or in the shower because it makes me feel great.

제안: Cevabınızı daha açık ve anlaşılır yapmak için düşüncelerinizi net ifade edin ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın. Ayrıca, soruya doğrudan cevap verin ve gerekirse destekleyici detaylar ekleyin.

예시: I don't really want to sing for anyone in particular. I usually sing just for myself and don't think much about performing for others.

제안: Cümlelerinizi daha doğru ve akıcı yapmak için dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimlerine dikkat edin. Ayrıca, cümlenizi tamamlayarak düşüncelerinizi net ifade edin.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when I see others singing, they seem entertained and happy. Therefore, I believe people should sing more often.

× I love singing with my sisters in Korea, Korea, and I love singing with loud voices.

✓ I love singing with my sisters in Korea, and I love singing loudly.

The phrase 'with loud voices' is awkward and incorrect here; 'loudly' is the correct adverb to describe how you sing. Also, repeating 'Korea' is unnecessary.

× No, because I think my voice is not good to be a singer or to be a in the band.

✓ No, because I think my voice is not good enough to be a singer or to be in a band.

The preposition 'in' should be followed by 'a band' without 'the' because it refers to any band, not a specific one. Also, 'good to be' is incorrect; 'good enough to be' is the correct expression.

× I sing a song in house with myself or in the shower.

✓ I sing a song at home by myself or in the shower.

The phrase 'in house' is incorrect; 'at home' is the correct expression. Also, 'with myself' is incorrect; 'by myself' is the proper reflexive pronoun usage here.

× It's makes me feel great.

✓ It makes me feel great.

The auxiliary 'It's' (it is) is incorrect here; the correct subject-verb form is 'It makes'. The definite article is not the issue, but the verb form is.

× No, I don't want to sing to be a someone, to ask someone.

✓ No, I don't want to sing to be someone or to ask someone.

The article 'a' before 'someone' is incorrect because 'someone' is an indefinite pronoun and does not need an article.

× I actually I don't think about it, but I didn't.

✓ Actually, I don't think about it, and I haven't.

The sentence has redundant pronouns and incorrect tense usage. 'I actually I' is incorrect; 'Actually, I' is correct. Also, 'but I didn't' is unclear; 'and I haven't' fits better.

× I don't want to sing another person.

✓ I don't want to sing for another person.

The verb 'sing' requires the preposition 'for' when indicating the person you sing to. Also, 'another person' is correct here.

× It's yes, it's can because when I saw people singing they are actually entertains and I are actually very happy.

✓ Yes, it can because when I see people singing, they are actually entertained and I am actually very happy.

'It's yes, it's can' is incorrect; 'Yes, it can' is correct. 'Saw' should be present tense 'see' to match the general statement. 'Entertains' should be past participle 'entertained' in passive voice. 'I are' is incorrect; 'I am' is correct.

× I think they should sing more or they should go to the.

✓ I think they should sing more or they should go to concerts.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'go to the.' It needs a noun after 'the' to complete the thought. Adding 'concerts' completes the sentence logically.