Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误和重复词汇，影响了表达的自然流畅。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式，避免重复使用同一词汇。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it gives me a sense of satisfaction. When I sing outdoors, I feel happy and free.

제안: 回答表达了没有学过唱歌的遗憾，但用词不够准确，句子结构不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意句子连贯性。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally. It's a pity because I never had the chance, but if I get the opportunity in the future, I will definitely try my best to learn.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，明确表达想为母亲唱歌的意愿。

예시: If I had to choose, I would like to sing for my mother because she is the most important person in my life and has always supported me.

제안: 回答中多次出现拼写错误和表达不清，影响了意思的传达。建议注意单词拼写，使用更准确的词汇，并使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, singing is a wonderful way to express emotions and feelings towards others. If a song has a meaningful message, it can bring happiness to everyone.

× Of course yes I do because seeing can brings a feeling of satisfaction to me and when I sing outside I will feel happy and feel feel feel free.

✓ Of course yes I do because singing can bring a feeling of satisfaction to me and when I sing outside I will feel happy and feel free.

这里的动词形式错误，动名词作主语时应使用动名词形式'singing'，而不是'seeing'。另外，'can brings'中'can'后应接动词原形，故应为'can bring'。重复的'feel'应删除。

× Yes, seeing is a great way to express people's emotion and their attitude to someone, and if a son has a pleasing reason, I think this song can bring the happiness to everybody.

✓ Yes, singing is a great way to express people's emotion and their attitude to someone, and if a song has a pleasing reason, I think this song can bring happiness to everybody.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，因为主题是唱歌。'a son'应为'a song'，语义更合理。'the happiness'中的定冠词'the'不必要，应去掉。