Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，且有语法错误，如“'cause”应避免口语缩写，且句子结构稍显混乱。建议使用更自然流畅的表达，并注意语法准确。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because I love beautiful melodies. Moreover, singing karaoke with my friends is a great way to strengthen our friendship.

제안: 回答基本清晰，但存在语法错误，如“haven't learn”应为“haven't learned”，且“friend”应为复数“friends”。建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，同时丰富细节使回答更具体。

예시: No, I haven't learned formal singing because I don't study music. However, I enjoy singing with my friends at karaoke venues during my free time.

제안: 回答不完整且含糊，句子结构混乱，表达不清。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和无意义的词语，保持句子连贯。

예시: I usually sing just for myself because I am not confident in my singing skills. I enjoy singing with my best friends at karaoke venues.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子未完成且重复，缺乏连贯性。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子流畅，并具体说明唱歌带来的好处。

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps me express my emotions and relax after a busy day. Additionally, it can improve my mood and reduce stress.

× No, I haven't learn how to sing because I'm not major in music, but I really enjoy singing, especially in my free time.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because I'm not majoring in music, but I really enjoy singing, especially in my free time.

这里使用了现在完成时态，助动词'haven't'后面应该接动词的过去分词形式，'learn'应改为'learned'。另外，'I'm not major in music'应改为'I'm not majoring in music'，因为表示正在学习某专业时用动名词形式。

× I often sing with my friend at karaoke venues.

✓ I often sing with my friends at karaoke venues.

'friend'应使用复数形式'friends'，因为通常和多个朋友一起唱歌。

× Actually, I only want to sing for myself because I'm not good at singing. I only sing at Karaoke Venus with my best friends, but I'm not. But I'm I really.

✓ Actually, I only want to sing for myself because I'm not good at singing. I only sing at karaoke venues with my best friends.

原句中存在语句不完整和重复，'but I'm not. But I'm I really.'无意义且语法错误，应删除以保持句子通顺。

× Yes, I absolutely think singing can bring happiness to people As for me, singing allows me to express my emotion and unwind after a busy day and it can also and it can also help me to.

✓ Yes, I absolutely think singing can bring happiness to people. As for me, singing allows me to express my emotions and unwind after a busy day, and it can also help me relax.

原句缺少标点符号，导致句子连贯性差，且存在重复短语'and it can also'。'emotion'应为复数形式'emotions'，最后部分不完整，应补充完整表达。