Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "a little bit more easier" (should be "a little easier"). Also, try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details, and use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it brightens my mood and helps me express my feelings without needing to talk to others. For instance, when I'm stressed, singing allows me to relax and feel better.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Use a clear topic sentence and avoid repetition. Also, explain your learning method more specifically and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I often watch videos of professional singers to learn techniques and understand how to improve my singing. This helps me practice on my own.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to express your ideas more naturally and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons.

예시: I usually sing for myself because it helps me express my feelings and relax. For example, after a stressful day, singing lifts my spirits and makes me feel more positive.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Make sure to structure your response clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your opinion effectively.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness, especially for introverted people who find it easier to express their emotions through music rather than words. Singing allows them to communicate their feelings and feel joyful.

× I do like singing as it brightens my mood and also it makes my life a little bit more easier to live as I can express myself alone rather than discussing with someone.

✓ I do like singing as it brightens my mood and also it makes my life a little bit easier to live as I can express myself alone rather than discussing with someone.

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective. Adding 'more' before a comparative adjective is redundant and grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'a little bit easier'.

× I don't, but I usually watch videos of singers singing and emphasizing the same thing which they're singing.

✓ I don't, but I usually watch videos of singers singing and emphasising the same thing which they're singing.

The verb 'emphasizing' should be in the present participle form consistent with 'singing' and British English spelling uses 's' instead of 'z' in 'emphasising'. This maintains tense consistency and correct spelling.

× So I didn't learn from an expert, but I do watch videos of how to sing and why not to sing.

✓ So I haven't learnt from an expert, but I do watch videos of how to sing and why not to sing.

The present perfect tense 'haven't learnt' is more appropriate here to indicate experience up to now rather than a simple past action. Also, 'learnt' is the British English past participle of 'learn'.

× I generally sing for myself like it's like I'm expressing my feelings which I can do it with someone.

✓ I generally sing for myself as if I'm expressing my feelings, which I cannot do with someone.

The original sentence has redundant and unclear pronoun usage. 'Which I can do it with someone' is incorrect; 'which I cannot do with someone' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'like it's like' is redundant; 'as if' is more appropriate.

× I usually sing for myself so that I can feel good vibes after having a stressful day.

✓ I usually sing for myself so that I can feel good vibes after having a stressful day.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence related to the provided grammar problem types. No correction needed.

× Yes, I agree to the fact that it singing can bring happiness to the people for those specially who are introvert and can express themselves through words, but they can through by singing whatever they sing.

✓ Yes, I agree that singing can bring happiness to people, especially those who are introverted and can express themselves through words, but can do so better by singing whatever they want.

The original sentence has multiple structural issues: 'agree to the fact' should be 'agree that'; 'it singing' is incorrect, should be 'singing'; 'for those specially who are introvert' should be 'especially those who are introverted'; 'they can through by singing whatever they sing' is unclear and ungrammatical, corrected to 'can do so better by singing whatever they want' for clarity and correctness.