Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构重复。建议注意时态和动词形式的正确使用，避免重复词汇，并且句子应更简洁流畅。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing very much. When I was young, I often sang with my father, which created wonderful memories. Recently, I have developed a special interest in classical songs.

제안: 回答中时态混乱，表达不清晰，且句子结构不完整。建议使用正确的时态，简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: No, I haven't learned formal singing lessons yet. However, when I was a little girl, my father taught me to sing because he believed songs help people express their inner feelings and connect with others.

제안: 回答时态使用不当，句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态，简洁表达感情，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

예시: I want to sing for my grandmother because she took care of me when I was young. She always did the housework and cooked dinner for me, and I want to show my appreciation.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，清晰表达观点。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to everyone. It acts as a bridge that connects people's hearts and is a good way to express our feelings and appreciation to others.

× I always singing with my father.

✓ I was always singing with my father.

这里需要使用过去进行时态，表示过去某段时间内持续发生的动作，故应使用“was singing”。

× I have developed a particular liking classical singing song.

✓ I have developed a particular liking for classical singing songs.

动词短语“develop a liking”后面应接介词“for”，且“song”应为复数形式。

× Then I was a little girl.

✓ When I was a little girl.

“Then”用法不当，表示时间点应使用“When”。

× he said the song is a way to show the people's inner to contact every people in the same way.

✓ he said the song is a way to show people's inner feelings and to connect everyone in the same way.

“the people's inner”表达不完整，应补充“feelings”；“contact every people”应改为“connect everyone”，更符合表达习惯。

× She care for me and when I grow up to the high school she always do the housework and do the dinner for me.

✓ She cared for me and when I grew up to high school she always did the housework and made dinner for me.

主语为第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s或使用过去式；且时态应统一为过去时。

× I want to appreciate for her.

✓ I want to appreciate her.

动词“appreciate”后不需要介词“for”，直接加宾语。

× I think singing can bring the happiness to everybody.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to everybody.

“happiness”是不可数名词，前面不需要加定冠词“the”。

× The thing is a bridge to connect everyone inner.

✓ Singing is a bridge to connect everyone's inner feelings.

“The thing”指代不明确，应明确为“singing”；“everyone inner”应改为“everyone's inner feelings”。

× So I think single sign is a good way to show our appreciation and our feelings for other people.

✓ So I think singing is a good way to show our appreciation and our feelings for other people.

“single sign”是拼写错误，应为“singing”。