Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“enjoy to sing”应为“enjoy singing”，“can brings”应为“can bring”。建议注意动词形式和主谓一致，同时避免重复表达“joy”和“happy”，使语言更自然流畅。

예시: I really enjoy singing in my daily life because it helps me relieve stress and feel happier. Especially when I'm in a good mood, singing brings me a lot of joy and makes my day better.

제안: 回答中句子结构不完整，存在断句错误，如“my dad. Bought me”应连贯表达。动词时态和主谓一致也有问题，如“makes her songs better”不清楚指代。建议练习完整句子表达，注意时态和逻辑连贯。

예시: It was quite a long time ago when I was in kindergarten. My dad bought me singing lessons, and my teacher was very nice. She taught me many singing tips that helped me improve my songs.

제안: 回答中句子不完整且表达不清，如“she the most important thing she told me is to be confident of what you enjoy and when you are”语法错误且含义模糊。建议加强句子完整性和逻辑性，明确表达重点。

예시: I want to sing for my singing teacher because she was very kind during my childhood and taught me many things. The most important advice she gave me was to be confident in what I enjoy and who I am.

제안: 回答中表达了观点，但句子结构重复且部分表达不够自然，如“and more is to bring the positive effect to people”不通顺。建议使用更自然的连接词和表达方式，避免重复。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness and have a positive effect on people. When melodies change people's moods, I like to sing joyful songs to help them feel better and stay positive.

× I really enjoy to sing in my daily life because it helps me to release stress and feel happier.

✓ I really enjoy singing in my daily life because it helps me to release stress and feel happier.

动词 enjoy 后面应该接动名词（-ing 形式），而不是不定式 to sing。

× I think it can brings me a lot of joy and happy here and makes my day better.

✓ I think it can bring me a lot of joy and happiness here and make my day better.

情态动词 can 后面动词用原形 bring，而不是 brings；happy 应该用名词 happiness 来表达“快乐”。

× It was quite long ago and when I was in kindergarten, my dad. Bought me a singing lesson with my singing teacher and she was very nice.

✓ It was quite long ago when I was in kindergarten. My dad bought me a singing lesson with my singing teacher, and she was very nice.

句子中 bought 是过去式，正确；但原句断句不当，需调整标点和句子结构。

× Taught me a lot of the tips of singing and makes her songs better.

✓ She taught me a lot of singing tips and made my songs better.

主语缺失，应加上 she；taught 和 made 都是过去式，保持时态一致。

× The person I want to sing for is my singing teacher. In my childhood she was a very kind woman and taught me a lot and she the most important thing she told me is to be confident of what you enjoy and when you are.

✓ The person I want to sing for is my singing teacher. In my childhood, she was a very kind woman and taught me a lot. The most important thing she told me is to be confident in what you enjoy and who you are.

原句结构混乱，缺少连词和标点，导致表达不清晰。需要分句并调整表达。

× The most important thing she told me is to be confident of what you enjoy and when you are.

✓ The most important thing she told me is to be confident in what you enjoy and who you are.

短语 confident 后应接介词 in，而不是 of；同时 when you are 应改为 who you are 表示“你是谁”。

× Yes, I always think singing can bring happiness to people and more is to bring the positive effect to people.

✓ Yes, I always think singing can bring happiness to people and also bring positive effects to them.

句子结构不完整，表达不清晰，需调整连接词和句子结构。

× When the melodies change people's mood, I can sing more joyful melodies to people and they can feel better and stay positive.

✓ When melodies change people's moods, I can sing more joyful melodies to people so they can feel better and stay positive.

mood 应用复数 moods；连接词用 so 更合适，表达因果关系。