Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但有些语法错误和用词不当，如“sharing them that feeling”应为“sharing that feeling”。建议注意语法准确性，避免冗余，且句子结构更自然。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it allows me to express my emotions. It helps me relax and relieve stress. I also enjoy connecting with music and sharing that feeling with others.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“patients”应为“patience”，且句子稍显冗长。建议注意拼写和语法，简洁表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I enjoy singing alone and try to improve my voice by practicing and listening to different singers. I believe singing is a skill that develops over time with patience and practice.

제안: 回答中有词汇错误，如“families”应为“family”，“seeing”应为“singing”，“open midnight”表达不清。建议注意词汇准确性，句子表达更清晰自然。

예시: I would love to sing for my family and friends because they always support me. I also dream of singing for a larger audience someday, maybe at a concert or an open mic night.

제안: 回答中“seeing”应为“singing”，“evolve emotions”表达不准确，建议使用更恰当的词汇如“evoke emotions”。建议注意词汇准确性和表达自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I believe that singing can bring a lot of happiness to people because music has a unique ability to touch our hearts and evoke emotions. When we sing, we share our joys and stories with others, which helps create a sense of community.

× I also enjoy connecting with music and sharing them that feeling with others.

✓ I also enjoy connecting with music and sharing that feeling with others.

这里的代词使用错误，'them' 应该指代复数名词，但前文的 'feeling' 是不可数名词，应该用 'that' 来指代单数的感觉。

× I believe that singing is a skill that it can develop over time with patients and practice.

✓ I believe that singing is a skill that can develop over time with patience and practice.

句中多余使用了代词 'it'，导致结构不正确，应去掉 'it'。另外，'patients' 是病人，正确词应为 'patience'（耐心）。

× I would love to sing for my families and friends because they always support me.

✓ I would love to sing for my family and friends because they always support me.

'family' 在这里指一个整体，通常用单数形式，'families' 是复数，表示多个家庭，不符合语境。

× I also dream of seeing for a larger audience someday, maybe at a concert or an open midnight.

✓ I also dream of singing for a larger audience someday, maybe at a concert or an open mic night.

'seeing for' 是错误搭配，应为 'singing for'。另外，'open midnight' 应为 'open mic night'，指开放麦克风之夜。

× Yes, I believe that seeing can bring a lot of happiness to people because music has a unique ability to touch our hearts and evolve emotions.

✓ Yes, I believe that singing can bring a lot of happiness to people because music has a unique ability to touch our hearts and evoke emotions.

'seeing' 应为 'singing'，动词错误。'evolve emotions' 用词不当，正确应为 'evoke emotions'，意为唤起情感。