Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'the singing most' and improve grammar by saying 'it boosts my mind and gives me relaxation.' Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and refresh my mind. I often sing my favourite songs at home or while driving, which makes me feel happier and less stressed.

제안: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to answer directly and explain your point clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid awkward phrasing.

예시: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons. I sing naturally because it allows me to express my emotions and feelings freely.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and structured. Instead of 'Not anyone,' say 'I prefer to sing for myself.' Also, explain your reasons clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: I prefer to sing for myself because it helps me stay healthy and allows me to express my feelings and emotions.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is confusing due to grammar and sentence structure errors. Try to organize your thoughts clearly and use linking words. Avoid awkward phrases like 'people are like to stay healthy' and 'it is the singing is of mental well-being.'

예시: Yes, definitely. Singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and emotions. Moreover, it contributes to mental well-being and helps people stay healthy.

× Yes, I like the singing most because it boosts my mind and give me relaxation.

✓ Yes, I like singing the most because it boosts my mind and gives me relaxation.

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'the singing most' is incorrect; it should be 'singing the most' to express preference correctly.

× I often sing my favorite songs at my home or in the car.

✓ I often sing my favourite songs at home or in the car.

The preposition 'at' before 'my home' is unnecessary; 'at home' is the correct expression. Also, 'my home' is less common than 'home' in this context.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learnt' is a British English past tense form; 'learned' is the preferred past participle in Canadian English, which is the target variety here.

× No, it is automatically because when I sing, I often express my emotions, my feelings to sing the song while.

✓ No, it happens automatically because when I sing, I often express my emotions and feelings through the song.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'It is automatically' is incorrect; 'it happens automatically' is correct. Also, 'my feelings to sing the song while' is ungrammatical and unclear; rephrasing improves clarity and correctness.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Not anyone. I have to sing by myself because it helps me to stay healthy and I express my feelings and emotions.

✓ No one. I have to sing by myself because it helps me stay healthy and express my feelings and emotions.

'Not anyone' is incorrect; 'No one' is the correct negative pronoun here. Also, 'helps me to stay' can be simplified to 'helps me stay' for naturalness.

× Yes, definitely singing brings happiness among people because it is a way to express your feelings and emotions as well as people are like to stay healthy and they it is the singing is of mental well-being.

✓ Yes, definitely singing brings happiness to people because it is a way to express your feelings and emotions. Also, people like to stay healthy, and singing contributes to mental well-being.

'Brings happiness among people' should be 'brings happiness to people'. The original sentence is run-on and confusing; splitting into two sentences improves clarity. 'People are like to stay healthy' is incorrect; 'people like to stay healthy' is correct. 'They it is the singing is of mental well-being' is ungrammatical and rephrased for clarity.