Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“can't find the right tongue”不符合英语习惯，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复。可以简洁明了地表达不喜欢唱歌的原因。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I find it difficult to sing in tune, and it makes me feel uncomfortable.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并且清楚说明学习唱歌的经历和感受。

예시: Yes, I have learned singing as part of my preschool education major. Although the teacher was patient, I still find it hard to sing correctly.

제안: 表达中有语法错误和不自然的用法，如“that is a terrible thing for both sides”。建议用更自然的表达方式，简洁说明不想为别人唱歌的原因。

예시: Actually, I don't want to sing for anyone because I'm not good at it, and I think it might make both me and the listeners uncomfortable.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“seeing”应为“singing”，句子结构不完整。建议使用正确的词汇和连贯的句子表达观点。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness. For some people, singing is a good way to improve their mood when they feel sad, as listening to powerful songs can be very comforting.

× No, I don't like singing because I I can't find the right tongue singing a terrible thing for me.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I can't find the right tone; singing is a terrible thing for me.

这里'singing'用法不当，应该用'noun + be + adjective'结构表达'唱歌对我来说是一件糟糕的事'，同时'tongue'应为'tone'，表示音调。建议用分号分开两个独立句子。

× Yeah, I learned because my major is preschool education, so we have the academic singing lesson.

✓ Yeah, I learned because my major is preschool education, so we had the academic singing lesson.

句中描述过去的经历，'have'应使用过去时'had'，保持时态一致。

× The teacher was very patient, but I, I I also don't know how to sing and find the right time.

✓ The teacher was very patient, but I still don't know how to sing and find the right tone.

'find the right time'应为'find the right tone'，且句中重复'I'应删除，'also'改为更自然的' still'。

× If I sing for anyone, that is a terrible thing for both sides.

✓ If I sing for anyone, that would be a terrible thing for both sides.

条件句中表达假设，主句应使用情态动词'would'，表示假设语气。

× For some people, seeing is a good way to adjust their emotions when they are sad.

✓ For some people, singing is a good way to adjust their emotions when they are sad.

'seeing'应为'singing'，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。

× When they are feel sad, they can listen some powerful singing, which is a good way to people.

✓ When they feel sad, they can listen to some powerful singing, which is a good way to help people.

'are feel'错误，应为'veel'；'listen'后需加介词'to'；'a good way to people'表达不完整，应为'a good way to help people'。