Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
Yes, I like singing because every time I feel stressful and unhappy, I will sing. I will sing to help me to release the stress. Seeing also a good way to make friends. It can help me to make friends who like the same song. Don't ask me.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
Actually, I didn't learned how learn how to sing. I usually learn learn how to sing during the media by watching the singers singing videos.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
I would like to sing a song for my friend. Maybe the song is spelled is spelled. Thanks friends company with me during my very hard time and I really want to sing some beautiful songs to her.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Yes, of course. Singing really can bring happiness to people because singing first can help you release the stress from your daily life. Second, it can help you tell the story from the song, maybe for love, for friendships or some drama thing.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 55.0제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复和不连贯的句子，同时用更自然的表达方式说明唱歌如何帮助你减压和交朋友。
예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress when I feel unhappy. Also, singing is a great way to make friends who share the same taste in music.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 40.0제안: 回答中有明显的语法错误和重复，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免重复，并且清楚地说明你是否正式学习过唱歌，以及你是如何自学的。
예시: Actually, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I usually learn to sing by watching videos of singers on the internet.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 45.0제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议明确表达你想为谁唱歌，并说明原因，避免重复和不完整的句子。
예시: I would like to sing a song for my friend to thank her for supporting me during a difficult time. I want to express my gratitude through a beautiful song.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 60.0제안: 你的回答结构较好，但表达可以更自然流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇和连接词，使观点更清晰，内容更丰富。
예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relieve stress and express emotions. Moreover, songs often tell stories about love, friendship, or other experiences, which can resonate with listeners.
문법
× Seeing also a good way to make friends.
✓ Singing is also a good way to make friends.
句子中'Seeing'应为'Singing'，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。此处需要动名词形式作为主语。
× Actually, I didn't learned how learn how to sing.
✓ Actually, I didn't learn how to sing.
助动词'did'后应接动词原形，不能用过去式'learned'。
× I usually learn learn how to sing during the media by watching the singers singing videos.
✓ I usually learn how to sing through the media by watching singers' singing videos.
句中重复了'learn'，应去掉多余部分；'during the media'表达不准确，改为'through the media'更合适；'singers singing videos'应改为'singers' singing videos'表示所有格。
× Maybe the song is spelled is spelled.
✓ Maybe the song is special.
原句重复且无意义，推测想表达'special'，需改正拼写和结构。
× Thanks friends company with me during my very hard time and I really want to sing some beautiful songs to her.
✓ Thanks to my friends for accompanying me during my very hard time, and I really want to sing some beautiful songs to them.
'Thanks friends company with me'结构错误，应使用'thanks to my friends for accompanying me'；'her'指代不明，前文提到的是'friends'，应使用复数代词'them'。
× I usually learn learn how to sing during the media by watching the singers singing videos.
✓ I usually learn how to sing through the media by watching singers' singing videos.
'during the media'用法错误，正确表达应为'through the media'，表示通过媒体学习。
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