Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang natural dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu. Misalnya, gunakan kalimat langsung yang menjelaskan alasan Anda menyukai bernyanyi dengan struktur yang benar.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress after a hard day.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa serta penggunaan kata. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan struktur yang benar. Jelaskan dengan singkat aktivitas Anda terkait musik.

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing. I usually just listen to music to relax my mind.

제안: Jawaban Anda terlalu singkat dan kurang menjelaskan. Berikan kalimat lengkap yang menjelaskan alasan Anda ingin bernyanyi untuk diri sendiri agar jawaban lebih natural dan efektif.

예시: I want to sing for myself because it makes me feel happy and confident.

제안: Jawaban Anda tidak jelas dan membingungkan. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan alasan yang jelas. Hindari kalimat yang tidak lengkap atau membingungkan.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their feelings and feel joyful.

× Yes, I do, because singing was the best things that we can do when we feel so stress after doing something that we don't like or maybe something that we hate.

✓ Yes, I do, because singing was the best thing that we can do when we feel so stressed after doing something that we don't like or maybe something that we hate.

The word 'things' should be singular 'thing' because it refers to a singular concept 'the best thing'. Also, 'stress' should be 'stressed' to correctly describe the feeling. This is a singular and plural issue combined with adjective form correction.

× Yes, I do, because singing was the best things that we can do when we feel so stress after doing something that we don't like or maybe something that we hate.

✓ Yes, I do, because singing is the best thing that we can do when we feel so stressed after doing something that we don't like or maybe something that we hate.

The verb 'was' should be 'is' to match the present tense context of the sentence. The sentence talks about a general truth, so present tense is appropriate.

× No, I haven't learned how to sings because I'm just seeing and listen to music for a relaxing my mind for everything that I do before that.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because I'm just seeing and listening to music to relax my mind for everything that I do before that.

The verb 'sings' should be 'sing' after 'how to' because 'to' is followed by the base form of the verb. Also, 'listen' should be 'listening' to match the parallel structure with 'seeing'. 'For a relaxing my mind' is incorrect; it should be 'to relax my mind' to express purpose.

× No, I haven't learned how to sings because I'm just seeing and listen to music for a relaxing my mind for everything that I do before that.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because I'm just seeing and listening to music to relax my mind for everything that I do before that.

The preposition 'for' before 'a relaxing my mind' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'to relax my mind' to indicate purpose.

× If you are should be something like that, I will say yes I do. Singing can bring ourselves happiness. I don't know why, but the what is that?

✓ If there should be something like that, I will say yes I do. Singing can bring us happiness. I don't know why, but what is that?

'You are should be' is incorrect; it should be 'there should be' to express existence. 'Ourselves' is a reflexive pronoun and is incorrectly used here; 'us' is the correct object pronoun. 'The what is that?' is incorrect word order; it should be 'what is that?'.