Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。建议简化表达，直接回答问题，并用一两句具体说明原因。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions. I started learning singing professionally when I was young to improve my musical skills.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，内容不够具体。建议用更清晰的句子说明学习唱歌的经历，并举例说明学习内容。

예시: Yes, I learned to sing professionally when I was a child. For example, my teacher taught me how to pronounce words correctly and control my voice, which was very important.

제안: 表达有些生硬，语法错误较多。建议用更自然的表达方式说明想为谁唱歌及原因。

예시: I want to sing for my mother, especially on Mother's Day, because it's a special occasion to show my gratitude and love for her.

제안: 回答不连贯，语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体理由支持。

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because melodies can relax people, and meaningful lyrics can inspire deep thoughts.

× Yeah, I like saying I have.

✓ Yeah, I like singing.

这里动词后面应该用动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。'like'后面接动名词'singing'，而不是'saying'。

× I learned how to sing in a professional way when I was really young because my piano teacher told me if I want to improve my musical skills learning.

✓ I learned how to sing in a professional way when I was really young because my piano teacher told me that if I want to improve my musical skills, I need to keep learning.

原句结构不完整，缺少主句和从句的连接词，且表达不清晰。需要加上'that'引导宾语从句，并补充完整句意。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt'是英式英语过去分词，'learned'是美式英语。根据上下文选择统一用法。此处建议用'learned'。

× we need to pay attention to the real way to pronounce and the same, you know, right away.

✓ we need to pay attention to the correct way to pronounce, and do it the same way, you know, right away.

'real way to pronounce'表达不准确，应为'correct way to pronounce'。'the same'后缺少具体内容，需补充完整表达。

× I want to sing for my mother, especially a Mother's Day.

✓ I want to sing for my mother, especially on Mother's Day.

表示特定时间点时，应该用介词'on'，即'on Mother's Day'。

× I want to improve my appreciation to my mother to this way.

✓ I want to express my appreciation to my mother in this way.

'improve my appreciation to my mother to this way'表达不正确，'appreciation'通常用'express'搭配，且介词应为'in this way'。

× because of melody can make me feel relaxing and the meaningful lyrics can give me more, made me have more deep thinker, deep thinking.

✓ because the melody can make me feel relaxed and the meaningful lyrics can make me think more deeply.

原句结构混乱，语法错误较多。'because of'后应接名词短语，'make me feel relaxing'应为'make me feel relaxed'，'made me have more deep thinker, deep thinking'表达不通顺，应改为'make me think more deeply'。