Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains a spelling mistake ('seeing' instead of 'singing') which affects clarity. Try to use correct vocabulary and avoid errors. Also, provide a more natural and concise response, for example, start with a clear topic sentence and then briefly explain your reason.

예시: I don't like singing because I can't sing well and I've never had any formal training.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but the phrase 'I haven't done that' is a bit informal and could be improved. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: No, I haven't learnt how to sing yet, but I hope to have the opportunity to take professional singing lessons in the future.

제안: Your answer is direct but could be improved by adding more detail and using linking words to make it more natural and complete.

예시: I would like to sing for my best friend because she is very close to me and I want to show my appreciation.

제안: There is a spelling mistake ('seeing' instead of 'singing') which affects clarity. Also, your answer is a bit formal and could be more natural. Try to use simpler language and link your ideas clearly.

예시: Yes, singing can make people happy because it helps them express their feelings, and studies have shown it can improve mental health.

× I do not like seeing because I cannot sing well and I've never been taught how to sing.

✓ I do not like singing because I cannot sing well and I've never been taught how to sing.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect here; the correct gerund form related to the activity is 'singing'. 'Seeing' refers to the act of perceiving with the eyes, which does not fit the context. The correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, seeing can bring happiness to people because it allows people to express their emotions, and this has been justified by psychological research to be contributive to mental health.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it allows people to express their emotions, and this has been justified by psychological research to be contributive to mental health.

The word 'seeing' is incorrectly used instead of 'singing'. 'Singing' is the correct gerund form related to the context of the conversation about singing. This correction ensures the sentence conveys the intended meaning.