Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“seeing some songs”应为“singing some songs”。建议注意动词的正确使用，并避免重复表达。可以简洁明了地表达喜欢唱歌的原因。

예시: Yes, definitely. I enjoy singing in my spare time because it helps me express my emotions and relax. Even though I'm not a professional singer, it feels like my own little concert.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I'm not have”应为“I haven't had”，以及时态和主谓一致问题。建议使用正确的时态和语法结构，表达更自然。

예시: Well, to be honest, I haven't had any formal singing training. I just joined a school club where the teacher taught us some basic skills, and I learned a lot from it.

제안: 回答表达清晰，但用词和句式较简单，且有重复。建议丰富词汇，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Actually, I prefer singing for myself because I'm a bit shy in front of others. I usually sing pop songs just for fun and personal enjoyment.

제안: 回答中“seeing”应为“singing”，且句子结构不完整。建议注意单词拼写和句子完整性，使用连贯的表达。

예시: Yes, definitely. I think singing is a wonderful way to improve your mood and express your emotions. People can sing just for fun, as music is the language of life.

× I really like seeing some songs in my spare time, even though I'm not the next pop singer.

✓ I really like singing some songs in my spare time, even though I'm not the next pop singer.

动词like后面接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。这里seeing应改为singing。

× Well, to be honest, I'm not have a traditional training of singing.

✓ Well, to be honest, I don't have traditional training in singing.

句子中使用了错误的动词形式“I'm not have”，应使用一般现在时的否定形式“don't have”。

× Well, to be honest, I'm not have a traditional training of singing.

✓ Well, to be honest, I don't have traditional training in singing.

搭配习惯是have training in某事，不能用of。

× I just join a school club and the teacher teach us some basic skills and I can learn a lot from it.

✓ I just joined a school club and the teacher taught us some basic skills and I learned a lot from it.

描述过去发生的动作，动词应使用过去式。join和teach应改为joined和taught，can learn改为learned。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

此句无语法错误，符合口语习惯。

× Well, I think nobody.

✓ Well, I don't think anyone.

表达否定时，使用don't think anyone更自然，nobody单独使用不完整。

× I prefer singing for myself because I'm a little bit shy in front of some people.

✓ I prefer singing by myself because I'm a little bit shy in front of some people.

表达“自己唱”时，习惯用by myself而非for myself。

× So I prefer to sing some pop music for myself just for fun, yeah.

✓ So I prefer singing some pop music by myself just for fun, yeah.

prefer后面接动名词形式更自然，且前文已用singing，保持一致。

× I think seeing is just a lovely way to change your mood and express your emotion.

✓ I think singing is just a lovely way to change your mood and express your emotion.

此处应为singing，表示唱歌，seeing是看见，语义不符。

× You can just for fun, and music is language of life.

✓ You can just do it for fun, and music is the language of life.

句子缺少动词，需加do it；music前缺少定冠词the。