Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
Yes, I love singing because it is a great way for me to recharge my battery because I think that singing is an enjoyable activity that I can spend time with whenever I have free time.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
Well, honestly, I must confess that I've never learned any singing lessons because I just think that singing is one of my favorite hobby and I don't want to boost it to my job.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
Well to be honest I am an introverted person so I just want to sing by myself and I don't want to any other people hear my voice.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Definitely, I think that singing is an enjoyable activity that people can do to bring happiness to others. And yes, so many people choosing to express their emotions.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 75.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có sự lặp lại ý tưởng ("because" được dùng hai lần liên tiếp). Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết hỗ trợ một cách mạch lạc.
예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and recharge. Whenever I have free time, I enjoy singing as a fun activity to lift my mood.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 70.0제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như "favorite hobby" thay vì "one of my favorite hobby". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh dùng các cụm từ không cần thiết như "I must confess".
예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I consider singing just a hobby, not something I want to pursue professionally.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự liên kết mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn và sửa lỗi như "I don't want any other people to hear my voice".
예시: I am an introverted person, so I prefer to sing alone because I don't want others to hear my voice.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "so many people choosing" nên là "so many people choose". Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để kết nối ý tưởng mạch lạc hơn.
예시: Definitely, singing is an enjoyable activity that can bring happiness to others because many people choose to express their emotions through music.
문법
× I just think that singing is one of my favorite hobby and I don't want to boost it to my job.
✓ I just think that singing is one of my favorite hobbies and I don't want to boost it to my job.
The word 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' because it is preceded by 'one of my favorite', which requires a plural noun. This is a singular and plural issue.
× I just want to sing by myself and I don't want to any other people hear my voice.
✓ I just want to sing by myself and I don't want any other people to hear my voice.
The phrase 'I don't want to any other people hear my voice' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'I don't want any other people to hear my voice.' The infinitive 'to hear' should follow 'any other people'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure.
× And yes, so many people choosing to express their emotions.
✓ And yes, so many people choose to express their emotions.
The verb 'choosing' is incorrectly used here. The correct form is the base verb 'choose' to agree with the present tense and subject 'people'. This is a verb + -ing form error.
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