Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有多处拼写错误，如"saying"应为"singing"，"seeing"应为"singing"，语法也不够准确。建议注意单词拼写和时态一致性，回答时尽量简洁明了，避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and unwind after a busy day.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和主谓一致问题。建议使用正确的时态和语法结构，并且补充更多细节使回答更丰富。

예시: Yes, I took singing classes when I was 12 years old, and I really enjoyed them because I was good at singing.

제안: 回答内容较丰富，但表达略显重复，建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达。

예시: I want to sing for my grandma because she used to sing to me every morning when I was a child, and I want to show my appreciation for her kindness.

제안: 回答中有拼写错误和语法问题，建议注意单词拼写和句子结构，同时可以增加更多具体例子来支持观点。

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people share their feelings and express emotions, making communication more meaningful.

× I am a big fan of saying because I think seeing can helps me unwind and contributed to my relaxation so that's the reason why I loved it.

✓ I am a big fan of singing because I think singing can help me unwind and contribute to my relaxation, so that's the reason why I love it.

动词后面接动名词时，应该用动词的-ing形式。原句中'saying'和'seeing'应为'singing'，且动词help和contribute应使用原形，因为can后面接动词原形。动词时态应保持一致，'loved'改为现在时'love'。

× Yes, when I 12 years old I had learn singing classes.

✓ Yes, when I was 12 years old I had singing classes.

表达过去时间时，应该用过去时态。'I 12 years old'缺少动词，应该是'I was 12 years old'。'had learn'结构错误，应该是'had singing classes'或'took singing classes'。

× I really enjoyed it because I were good at it.

✓ I really enjoyed it because I was good at it.

主语'I'后动词be应使用单数形式'was'，'were'用于复数或虚拟语气。

× Yes, I think seeing can bring happiness to people because it allows people share their feelings with others and it also can make people express their emotions.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it allows people to share their feelings with others and it can also make people express their emotions.

'seeing'应为'singing'。动词'allow'后应接不定式'to share'。'can also'的顺序应调整为'can also'。