Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如缺少冠词和动词形式错误，且表达不够自然。建议注意冠词的使用和动词的单复数形式，同时简化句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

예시: Yes, I am a big fan of singing because it helps me calm down and relax after a busy day.

제안: 回答中时态使用不当，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的过去时态，简洁明了地表达学习经历，并避免语法错误。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing for about two years when I was a child, and I really enjoyed it because I was quite good at it.

제안: 回答内容混乱，句子不通顺，词汇使用错误。建议理清表达逻辑，使用正确的词汇和句型，明确说明想为谁唱歌及原因。

예시: I want to sing for my grandmother because when I was a child, she used to sing songs to me every evening, which made me very happy.

제안: 回答中存在词汇错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的词汇，清楚表达唱歌如何传达情感，并适当扩展内容。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and share their feelings with others.

× I'm big fan of singing because I think singing can helps me calm down and it also can contribute to my relaxation.

✓ I'm a big fan of singing because I think singing can help me calm down and it also can contribute to my relaxation.

这里缺少冠词'a'，'big fan'是单数名词短语，前面需要加不定冠词'a'。另外，'can helps'中助动词'can'后面应接动词原形，不能加's'。

× Yes, when I was a kid, I have learned how to sing about two years.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I learned how to sing for about two years.

句子描述过去的经历，应该用一般过去时，不能用现在完成时'have learned'。另外，'how to sing about two years'缺少介词'for'表示持续时间。

× I really loved seeing from them because I sing was very well.

✓ I really loved learning from them because I sang very well.

'seeing from them'表达不正确，应为'learning from them'。'I sing was very well'结构混乱，应该是'I sang very well'，动词用过去式。

× For myself, I really want to sing for my grandma because when I was a kid, my grandmother often saw some songs before I got to buy the everyday in the evening.

✓ For myself, I really want to sing for my grandma because when I was a kid, my grandmother often sang some songs before I went to bed every evening.

'saw some songs'用词错误，应该用'sang some songs'表示唱歌。'got to buy the everyday'表达不通顺，应该是'went to bed every evening'表示每天晚上睡觉前。

× So that's the reason why I want to see some songs for my grandma.

✓ So that's the reason why I want to sing some songs for my grandma.

'see some songs'用词错误，应该是'sing some songs'表示唱歌。

× Yes, I think seeing can show people's emotion for others because people can through the singing to show their thinking.

✓ Yes, I think singing can show people's emotions to others because people can express their thoughts through singing.

'seeing'应为'singing'。'people's emotion'应为复数'emotions'。'can through the singing to show their thinking'结构错误，改为'can express their thoughts through singing'更通顺。