Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有些語法錯誤和重複用詞，且有過多的語氣詞（如 'umm', 'uh'），建議練習更流暢且結構清晰的句子，並避免冗詞。可以嘗試用更自然的表達方式來說明唱歌如何幫助你放鬆和振奮心情。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and lifts my mood, especially when I listen to energetic music.

제안: 回答中時態使用不當且語句不夠流暢，建議注意時態一致性，並避免重複詞彙。可以嘗試用更簡潔且正確的句子來描述學習唱歌的經歷。

예시: Yes, I learned to sing when I was in elementary school because the music teacher taught us our national song. However, I haven't had many opportunities to improve my singing skills since then.

제안: 回答中有許多語氣詞和重複詞，且語法不夠正確。建議練習用更清晰且結構完整的句子表達想法，並使用連接詞使語意更連貫。

예시: It depends on the situation, but usually I like to sing for my family because in our culture, it's often embarrassing to express love directly, so singing feels like an easier way to show my feelings.

제안: 回答中語法錯誤較多，且表達不夠清晰。建議練習用簡單明確的句子說明原因，並避免重複和不必要的詞彙。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because the lyrics and melody have a strong power to cheer people up and inspire positive feelings.

× Yes, I do like singing because singing has helped me relaxing and I found out there's a really powerful, umm, power to, uh, cheer me up when I listen to the hyper music.

✓ Yes, I do like singing because singing has helped me relax and I found out there's a really powerful, umm, power to, uh, cheer me up when I listen to the hyper music.

The verb 'help' is followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. So 'helping me relaxing' should be 'help me relax'. This is a common structure in English where 'help' is followed by the base verb without 'to'. (English explanation for Taiwan learners)

× Yes, when I was in elementary school, the music teacher will teach us how to sing our national national song.

✓ Yes, when I was in elementary school, the music teacher would teach us how to sing our national song.

When talking about past habitual actions, 'would' is used instead of 'will'. 'Will' is for future or present certainty, but here the action is in the past, so 'would' is correct. (English explanation for Taiwan learners)

× Yes, when I was in elementary school, the music teacher will teach us how to sing our national national song.

✓ Yes, when I was in elementary school, the music teacher would teach us how to sing our national song.

The phrase 'national national song' repeats 'national' unnecessarily. Also, 'national song' is a fixed phrase and does not need an article here because it is a specific song known to the speaker and listener. (English explanation for Taiwan learners)

× But when I grew older, I don't have chance to improve my singing skill, so I had learned how to sing in very young.

✓ But when I grew older, I didn't have a chance to improve my singing skills, so I had learned how to sing when I was very young.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly and misses articles. 'Don't have chance' should be 'didn't have a chance' to match past tense. 'Singing skill' should be plural 'singing skills' as it refers to ability in general. 'In very young' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was very young' to indicate age. (English explanation for Taiwan learners)

× Umm, I think it's based on a situation, but most of the time I want to sing for my family members because I think umm in in try China or in our culture is really embarrassing to to speak out our love.

✓ Umm, I think it depends on the situation, but most of the time I want to sing for my family members because I think in China or in our culture it is really embarrassing to speak out our love.

The phrase 'based on a situation' is better expressed as 'depends on the situation'. Also, 'in in try China' is a typo and should be 'in China'. The phrase 'to to speak out' has a repeated 'to' which should be removed. The sentence structure is improved for clarity. (English explanation for Taiwan learners)

× So I think singing is is more easier.

✓ So I think singing is easier.

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already the comparative form of 'easy'. Using 'more' with a comparative adjective is redundant and grammatically wrong. (English explanation for Taiwan learners)

× Oh yes, definitely, because as I mentioned before, I think the lyrics and the melody also the reason has have the really strong power for power to cheer up people and to infection.

✓ Oh yes, definitely, because as I mentioned before, I think the lyrics and the melody also have a really strong power to cheer up people and to inspire them.

The phrase 'has have' is incorrect; it should be 'have' because the subject is plural ('lyrics and melody'). 'Power for power to cheer up people and to infection' is unclear and incorrect; 'to infection' is likely a mistake for 'to inspire' or 'to affect'. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and clarity. (English explanation for Taiwan learners)

× So I think yes, happiness can be.

✓ So I think yes, happiness can be brought by singing.

The sentence 'happiness can be' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'brought by singing' completes the thought and clarifies the meaning. (English explanation for Taiwan learners)