Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言稍显重复且不够自然。建议避免重复表达，如“relax myself and unwind myself”可以简化为“help me relax”。同时，句子结构可以更自然流畅。

예시: I enjoy singing because it helps me relieve academic stress and relax after a busy day.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议注意时态和句子结构，避免重复词汇。可以用更自然的表达方式描述学习经历。

예시: Yes, I took singing lessons in primary school, but they were basic and focused on simple songs rather than professional training.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，且表达不够流畅。建议注意单复数形式，避免重复词汇，并用更自然的表达方式说明原因。

예시: I would like to sing for my family, especially my parents and grandparents, because they mean a lot to me and singing can help them feel relaxed.

제안: 回答未完成且表达不清晰，缺少具体细节。建议完整表达观点，避免句子中断，并提供具体例子或原因支持观点。

예시: Definitely, singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress, especially during difficult times.

× I like singing because I think it's a good way to reduce my pressure on academic learning and also it can relax myself and unwind myself.

✓ I like singing because I think it's a good way to reduce my pressure on academic learning and also it can relax me and help me unwind.

反身代词'myself'用法错误。'Relax'和'unwind'后面应接宾格代词'me'，而不是反身代词。建议用'me'替换'myself'。

× Yes, I have learned how to sing in my primary school and in my primary school there are singing lessons.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing in my primary school and in my primary school there were singing lessons.

描述过去发生的事情时，动词应使用过去时。'have learned'改为'slearned'，'are'改为'were'，以符合过去时间背景。

× But I think it it not professional it it's just teach us to sing the simple songs.

✓ But I think it is not professional; it just teaches us to sing simple songs.

句中缺少动词形式，'it it'重复，应改为'it is'。'teach'应为第三人称单数形式'teaches'，'the simple songs'中冠词'the'多余，应去掉。

× I want to sing for my families especially my parents and my grandparents because I think they are important person in my life and by by singing a song for them it can reduce them pressure.

✓ I want to sing for my family, especially my parents and my grandparents, because I think they are important people in my life and by singing a song for them it can reduce their pressure.

'families'应为单数'family'表示家庭整体；'person'应为复数'people'；'them pressure'应为'their pressure'，代词与名词所有关系错误。

× Definitely, I think singing can bring happiness to people. Many people sing a song to express their emotions and also to reduce the mental stress, especially the sons who have the.

✓ Definitely, I think singing can bring happiness to people. Many people sing songs to express their emotions and also to reduce mental stress, especially those who have it.

句子末尾不完整，缺少宾语。'a song'改为复数'songs'更符合习惯表达。'the sons who have the'不完整，改为'those who have it'使句子完整且通顺。