Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally good but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "I love participated" should be "I love participating" or "I have participated." Also, try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and relieve stress. For instance, I often sing with my friends on weekends, which improves my mood and boosts my confidence. Additionally, I enjoy participating in a singing group, which allows me to practice regularly.

제안: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. For example, "when I was kid" should be "when I was a kid," and "singing competitions it and it was very fun with full" is confusing. Try to use clear sentences and linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I took singing lessons when I was a kid, and I was also part of my school's singing group. We participated regularly in events, and I even joined local singing competitions, which were very enjoyable and helped me improve my skills.

제안: Your answer shows good feelings but has some grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. For example, "bigger supporters" should be "biggest supporters," and "That's" at the end is incomplete. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I would love to sing for my family because they have always been my biggest supporters. I feel free and comfortable singing in front of them, and I love them very much, so sharing my singing with them means a lot to me.

제안: There are several errors in your answer, such as "seeing" instead of "singing," and unclear phrases like "People can easily move one place to another to hear any kind of scene." Try to use correct vocabulary and clearer sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them express their emotions and release stress. For example, people often travel to concerts or events to listen to singing, which makes them feel happier and more relaxed.

× I love participated in a singing group.

✓ I love participating in a singing group.

The verb 'participated' is incorrectly used in past participle form here. After 'love', the verb should be in the '-ing' form to express an ongoing or habitual action. So, 'participating' is correct.

× I took singing lessons when I was kid and also I was a part of school singing group.

✓ I took singing lessons when I was a kid and also I was a part of the school singing group.

The phrase 'when I was kid' is missing the article 'a' before 'kid'. Also, 'school singing group' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the group. These are article errors (ID 22), but since the main tense is past, the correction is needed here.

× I took singing lessons when I was kid and also I was a part of school singing group.

✓ I took singing lessons when I was a kid and also I was a part of the school singing group.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'kid' and the definite article 'the' before 'school singing group'. Articles are necessary to specify nouns correctly in English.

× We participated regularly and I even participated in a local singing competitions it and it was very fun with full.

✓ We participated regularly and I even participated in local singing competitions. It was very fun and fulfilling.

The original sentence is run-on and confusing. 'Competitions it and it was very fun with full' is ungrammatical. Splitting into two sentences and correcting 'with full' to 'fulfilling' improves clarity and grammar.

× I even participated in a local singing competitions it and it was very fun with full.

✓ I even participated in local singing competitions. It was very fun and fulfilling.

The phrase 'a local singing competitions' incorrectly uses the singular article 'a' with plural noun 'competitions'. Removing 'a' corrects the quantifier usage.

× I would love to sing for my family because they have always been a bigger supporters.

✓ I would love to sing for my family because they have always been big supporters.

'A bigger supporters' is incorrect because 'supporters' is plural and 'a' is singular. Also, 'bigger' is comparative and needs a comparison object. 'Big supporters' is correct here.

× I feel free and comfortable here to sing in front of them.

✓ I feel free and comfortable singing in front of them.

The phrase 'feel free and comfortable here to sing' is awkward. Using the gerund 'singing' after 'comfortable' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× That's.

✓ That's all.

The sentence 'That's.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'all' completes the thought and makes it a proper sentence.

× Yes, I think seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people.

The word 'seeing' is a typo or incorrect word here; it should be 'singing' to match the context.

× People can easily move one place to another to hear any kind of scene and they can feel and they can feel better.

✓ People can easily move from one place to another to hear any kind of singing and they can feel better.

'One place to another' needs the preposition 'from' to be correct. 'Scene' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. The phrase 'they can feel and they can feel better' is repetitive; removing redundancy improves clarity.