Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it can be improved by correcting grammar and making the sentences more natural. For example, instead of 'Whenever I sing lovely,' you could say 'Whenever I sing beautifully' or 'Whenever I sing well.' Also, the last sentence is incomplete; you should finish the thought. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and have a stress-free day. Moreover, whenever I sing beautifully, I feel happy and enthusiastic. I usually sing with my friends, which makes the experience even more enjoyable.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'never finally learned' is unclear; you could say 'never formally learned.' Also, 'it's also help me' should be 'it also helps me.' Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas clearly.

예시: No, I have never formally learned how to sing, but I really enjoy singing by myself at home. I often practice alone because it helps me feel more comfortable and also helps me to relax my mind.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has some unclear and incomplete sentences. For example, 'Read out jazz music' is confusing. You might mean 'We often sing jazz music together.' Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'which' to make your answer coherent. Try to expand your answer with more specific details.

예시: I want to sing for my boyfriend because he is also a singer. We both love singing together, especially jazz music, which helps us understand each other better.

제안: Your answer is on the right track but contains grammatical mistakes and an incomplete sentence. For example, 'it helped me' should be 'it helps me,' and 'it also bring' should be 'it also brings.' The last part is incomplete; you should finish your thought. Use linking words like 'because' and 'and' properly to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I absolutely think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps me relax after a stressful day. Moreover, it also strengthens the connection between me and my partner.

× Whenever I sing lovely, I feel happy and enthusiastic.

✓ Whenever I sing, I feel happy and enthusiastic.

The adverb 'lovely' is incorrectly placed after the verb 'sing'. In English, adverbs describing the manner of an action usually come after the verb or at the end of the sentence. However, 'lovely' is an adjective, not an adverb, so it should not be used to modify 'sing' directly. Removing 'lovely' corrects the sentence.

× I usually sing with my friends which makes the experience.

✓ I usually sing with my friends, which makes the experience enjoyable.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. The relative clause 'which makes the experience' needs an object or complement to specify what it makes the experience. Adding 'enjoyable' completes the thought and improves sentence structure.

× No, I've never finally learned to sing, but I really enjoy singing myself at home.

✓ No, I've never learned to sing, but I really enjoy singing by myself at home.

The word 'finally' is misplaced and unnecessary here. Also, 'singing myself' is incorrect; the reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be preceded by a preposition 'by' to indicate doing the action alone. Removing 'finally' and adding 'by' before 'myself' corrects the sentence.

× I often practice alone because it helps me feel more comfortable and it's also help me to keep my mind relaxing.

✓ I often practice alone because it helps me feel more comfortable and it also helps me to keep my mind relaxed.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, 'keep my mind relaxing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'keep my mind relaxed' to express a state of relaxation.

× Read out jazz music whenever we sing together it gives us more understanding between us.

✓ We listen to jazz music whenever we sing together; it gives us a better understanding between us.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb at the beginning, making it incomplete. 'Read out jazz music' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'listen to'. Adding 'We' as the subject and correcting the verb improves clarity and grammar.

× Yes I absolutely think singing can bring happiness to people because it helped me a lot to relax from a stressful day and it also bring a good connectivity between me and my partner and.

✓ Yes, I absolutely think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps me a lot to relax after a stressful day and it also brings good connectivity between me and my partner.

The verb 'helped' should be in present tense 'helps' to match the present context. Similarly, 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'connectivity' is better used without 'a' and 'after' is more appropriate than 'from' in this context. The sentence was incomplete and has been corrected accordingly.