Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然流畅，语法和表达存在错误，且内容重复。建议简化表达，直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子说明原因。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I think my voice is not very good, and I feel shy performing in front of others.

제안: 回答内容不够聚焦，表达不清晰。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并简要说明原因或兴趣爱好。

예시: No, I never learned how to sing when I was a child. Instead, I enjoyed drawing pictures and watching my favorite TV shows.

제안: 回答逻辑混乱，表达不完整。建议先明确回答想为谁唱歌，然后简洁说明原因。

예시: I would like to sing for my parents and close friends because they are supportive, even though I don't have a good voice.

제안: 回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议用简单句表达观点，并举例说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness. For example, singing a cheerful song can make people feel joyful and lucky.

× Actually, I didn't.

✓ Actually, I don't.

这里的回答是针对现在的喜好，应该使用一般现在时，而不是过去时。'didn't'是过去时，表示过去不喜欢，但问题是询问现在是否喜欢。

× I don't like a scene because my tone may be not very perfect and I'm a little introverted to shade shape to performance in in front of people.

✓ I don't like singing because my tone may not be very perfect and I'm a little introverted to perform in front of people.

'a scene'用词不当，应为'singing'。'shade shape to performance'表达不清，改为'to perform'更准确。'in in'重复，应去掉一个。

× To be honest, not in my childhood, I didn't have a hobby on it.

✓ To be honest, in my childhood, I didn't have a hobby for it.

'not in my childhood'位置不当，改为'in my childhood'更自然。'have a hobby on it'搭配错误，应为'have a hobby for it'。

× I prefer to learn how to draw a pictures and my favorite characteristics in some TV series or comedies.

✓ I prefer to learn how to draw pictures and my favorite characters in some TV series or comedies.

'a pictures'单复数错误，应为'pictures'。'characteristics'应为'characters'，指角色。

× I want to sing for my parents or a few of my close friends because they didn't they don't love my voice because as I mentioned before, my voice is not good.

✓ I want to sing for my parents or a few of my close friends because they don't love my voice, as I mentioned before, my voice is not good.

'they didn't they don't'重复且时态混乱，应去掉'didn't'，保持现在时。句子结构需调整使其更通顺。

× So I think if I prefer.

✓ So I think I prefer not to.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达意思。

× Although I am not a singer, I still think the thing can impress happiness to others.

✓ Although I am not a singer, I still think singing can bring happiness to others.

'the thing'指代不明，应明确为'singing'。'impress happiness'搭配错误，应为'bring happiness'。

× Like if you sing a very happy song like how Yuan Lai it will bring it will makes you feel really the lucky comes to you.

✓ For example, if you sing a very happy song like 'Yuan Lai', it will make you feel really lucky.

句子结构混乱，'like how Yuan Lai'表达不清，改为'like "Yuan Lai"'。'bring it will makes'重复且时态错误，改为'it will make'。'the lucky comes to you'表达不自然，改为'feel really lucky'。