Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了不喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言表达不够自然，有语法错误（如'sane abilities'应为'singing abilities'），且句子较长且有些重复。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇，并避免冗余。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I often feel nervous when I sing in front of others. I prefer playing musical instruments instead.

제안: 你的回答结构清晰，内容具体，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复表达“when I was in kindergarten”和“around when I was 5 or 6 years old”。

예시: Yes, I learned to sing when I was in kindergarten, around 5 or 6 years old. However, I don't remember much about the lessons or what the teachers said.

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误（'seeing'应为'singing'），句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并明确说明想为谁唱歌。

예시: Although I'm not good at singing, I sometimes sing for my family and close friends.

제안: 你的回答内容丰富，结构合理，但有拼写错误（'seeing'应为'singing'）。建议注意拼写准确性，并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions. For example, many people feel joyful and relaxed when they sing their favorite songs, which improves their mood.

× I sometimes feel frustrated when I'm staying in front of others and I'm really worried about my sane abilities, so I prefer playing the music instrument rather than singing.

✓ I sometimes feel frustrated when I'm standing in front of others and I'm really worried about my singing abilities, so I prefer playing musical instruments rather than singing.

这里的 'staying' 用法不正确，应该用 'standing' 表示站在别人面前。'sane abilities' 是拼写错误，正确应为 'singing abilities'。'the music instrument' 应改为复数形式 'musical instruments'，因为通常指多种乐器。

× Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in kindergarten, so it was quite a long time ago, around when I was 5 or 6 years old. However, I don't remember much about the lessons or what the teachers told.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in kindergarten, so it was quite a long time ago, around when I was 5 or 6 years old. However, I don't remember much about the lessons or what the teachers said.

这里 'what the teachers told' 用法不当，应该用过去时 'said' 来表达老师说的话。

× Even I'm not good at seeing, but actually sometimes I listen to my family and the people that I'm really close with.

✓ Even though I'm not good at singing, I sometimes sing for my family and the people that I'm really close with.

原句中 'seeing' 是拼写错误，应为 'singing'。'Even I'm not good at' 结构不完整，应该用 'Even though' 引导让步状语从句。'listen to my family' 语义不符，应改为 'sing for my family'。

× Yes, I believe seeing can definitely bring happiness to people. Singing allows individuals to express their emotions. For example, many people feel joyful and relaxed when they sing their favorite songs, which helps improve their mood.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. Singing allows individuals to express their emotions. For example, many people feel joyful and relaxed when they sing their favorite songs, which helps improve their mood.

'seeing' 是拼写错误，应为 'singing'。

× so I prefer playing the music instrument rather than singing.

✓ so I prefer playing musical instruments rather than singing.

'the music instrument' 用法不当，应该用复数形式 'musical instruments'，表示一般意义上的乐器。