Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は簡潔で自然ですが、理由をもう少し具体的に説明するとより良くなります。例えば、どのようにリラックスできるのか、どんな時に歌うのが好きかなどを加えると効果的です。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax after a long day. Singing allows me to express my feelings and forget about stress.

제안: 文法と表現に誤りがあり、意味が伝わりにくいです。過去形を正しく使い、誰に教わったのかを明確に述べる必要があります。また、文を簡潔にまとめることも重要です。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child. My grandfather taught me because he loved music.

제안: 回答は自然で簡潔ですが、もう少し具体的に自分のために歌う理由や状況を説明すると良いでしょう。

예시: I want to sing for myself because it helps me relax and enjoy my own company, especially when I feel stressed.

제안: 回答は明確で自然ですが、もう少し具体的な理由や例を加えると説得力が増します。例えば、どのような感情を感じるのかや、どんな場面で歌が役立つかを説明すると良いです。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and express their emotions, such as joy or sadness, which can be very therapeutic.

× I have learned how to sing and I was a child because I have. Her grandfather taught me how to sing.

✓ I learned how to sing when I was a child because my grandfather taught me.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes present perfect tense ('I have learned') with past tense ('I was a child') and contains an incomplete phrase ('because I have'). The correct form uses simple past tense 'learned' to indicate a completed action in the past and clarifies the reason by properly connecting the clauses. Also, 'Her grandfather' is incorrect as the subject is 'I'; it should be 'my grandfather.'