Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不清晰，建议你使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复。可以直接回答喜欢唱歌的原因，然后用具体的细节支持你的观点。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it is very enjoyable. I often go karaoke with my friends, which helps me relax and lift my mood.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，建议你用正确的时态和词汇表达，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I have learned singing online by purchasing some simple songs. Although I'm not very good at it, I often sing with my friends because it is very relaxing for me.

제안: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和句子结构有问题。建议你直接回答想为谁唱歌，并用具体的节日和理由来支持你的观点。

예시: I want to sing for my family during special festivals like Chinese New Year. I believe it will make them happy and help us create wonderful memories.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，建议你用更准确的词汇表达观点，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, definitely. Singing is very useful and relaxing; it helps reduce stress and improve people's mood. Moreover, it is an enjoyable way to pass the time.

× I often say means of my friends doing karaoke.

✓ I often sing with my friends doing karaoke.

The verb 'say' is incorrectly used here; the intended meaning is to express the action of singing with friends. The correct verb is 'sing' in the present tense, and 'doing karaoke' is a participle phrase describing the activity. The error is due to incorrect verb choice and form.

× I think it also can create.

✓ I think it can also create happiness.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'create'. Also, the adverb 'also' is better placed after the modal verb 'can'. The correction completes the sentence and improves word order.

× I just learn it online and I purchase some simple songs.

✓ I just learned it online and I purchased some simple songs.

The verbs 'learn' and 'purchase' should be in the past tense 'learned' and 'purchased' to match the past time frame indicated by 'just' and the context of having already done these actions.

× Even though I didn't good at it, I often seen it with my friends because it's on.

✓ Even though I wasn't good at it, I often sang it with my friends because it's fun.

'Didn't good' is incorrect; the correct form is 'wasn't good' to express inability in the past. 'Seen' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb; here, the simple past 'sang' fits better. 'Because it's on' is unclear; 'because it's fun' makes more sense in context.

× I think it's very relax.

✓ I think it's very relaxing.

'Relax' is an adjective or verb, but here the gerund/adjective form 'relaxing' is needed to describe the experience. Using 'relaxing' correctly modifies the subject.

× Well to be honest I want to sing for my family members on doing some special festivals like Chinese New Years.

✓ Well, to be honest, I want to sing for my family members during special festivals like Chinese New Year.

The phrase 'on doing some special festivals' is incorrect; the preposition 'during' is appropriate to indicate time. Also, 'Chinese New Years' should be singular 'Chinese New Year' as it refers to one festival.

× I think if I could do it they can. Very happy and I we can some create some wonderful memories to remember.

✓ I think if I could do it, they would be very happy and we could create some wonderful memories to remember.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect modal verbs and pronouns. 'They can' should be 'they would be', 'I we can some create' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'we could create'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, definitely on saying is very useful and relaxing, which is a great way to reduce strength and enhance people's mood.

✓ Yes, definitely singing is very useful and relaxing, which is a great way to reduce stress and enhance people's mood.

'On saying' is incorrect; the correct noun form is 'singing'. Also, 'reduce strength' is likely a mistake for 'reduce stress'. The correction fixes pronoun and word choice errors.