Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意句子结构的完整性，避免断句和语法错误，同时用更自然的表达方式描述情感。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, when I feel stressed, singing my favorite songs makes me feel calmer and happier.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不连贯，表达不清晰。建议练习时态使用和句子连贯性，避免无意义的词汇和断句。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school. All students had to get a singing license as part of the curriculum. Although I wasn't very good, I really enjoyed practicing songs with my classmates.

제안: 回答中断句不完整，表达不流畅。建议使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I would like to sing for my close friends because they always encourage me when I feel stressed. Additionally, sharing a song with loved ones can make our relationships closer.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和断句问题，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，避免重复和无意义的词汇，增强表达的逻辑性。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. It not only helps us relax and express our feelings but also relieves stress and improves our mood.

× Yes. I usually enjoy singing because.

✓ Yes, I usually enjoy singing because it can make me relaxed and express my emotions.

句子结构不完整，because后面需要有完整的从句，说明原因。应将断句合并，补充完整内容。

× It can make me relaxed and impress my emotions.

✓ It can make me relaxed and express my emotions.

动词'impress'用法错误，表达情感应使用'express'，即表达情绪。

× For example, when I'm. Feeling stressed? Singing my favorite songs makes me more relaxed.

✓ For example, when I'm feeling stressed, singing my favorite songs makes me more relaxed.

句子断句错误，'when I'm'后不应有句号，且疑问句标点不合适，应合并为完整句子。

× Yes, I have learned how to sing when I was a student in the primary school.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a student in primary school.

时间状语为过去时间，应用一般过去时learned而非现在完成时have learned。

× At that time, all students. How to take singing license as part of the curriculum.

✓ At that time, all students learned how to take a singing license as part of the curriculum.

句子断句错误，缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整。

× How to take singing license as part of the curriculum.

✓ How to take a singing license as part of the curriculum.

singing license前缺少不定冠词'a'，英语中单数可数名词前需加冠词。

× Although I'm not good, I see him.

✓ Although I'm not good, I still enjoy it.

句子不通顺，'I see him'无意义，应表达自己虽然不擅长但仍喜欢。

× I really enjoyed practicing song with my class.

✓ I really enjoyed practicing songs with my class.

句子缺少复数形式，且表达应为复数songs，且with my class表达正确。

× I would like to sing for my close friends.

✓ I would like to sing for my close friends.

句子无语法错误，无需修改。

× Additionally, sharing. A song with loved ones. Can make a more closer and.

✓ Additionally, sharing a song with loved ones can make us closer.

句子断句错误，且表达不完整，'a more closer and'不完整且比较级用法错误，应简化为'closer'。

× Can make a more closer and.

✓ Can make us closer.

'more closer'是比较级错误，'closer'本身是比较级，不应加more。

× Singing not only can make us relaxed and impress our. Impressions.

✓ Singing can not only make us relaxed and express our feelings,

句子断句错误，'impress our impressions'表达错误，应为'express our feelings'，且not only结构位置调整。

× But also can. Release. Our pressure and. Improve our mood.

✓ but also can release our pressure and improve our mood.

句子断句错误，多个句号导致句子不完整，应合并为一句完整句子。