Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
Of course, I really like singing because I think seeing is a good way for me to relax and I wind up a busy day. On top of that, I can get some energy from the music I love, which makes me feel motivated and powerful. Forget that.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
Of course, yes. Actually, I started learning singing when I was in primary school and I often participated in some sing competitions to gain valuable skills and experience because it really makes me confident.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
If you ask me, I guess my choice would be my mother because she.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Of course, yes, if people see some energetic music, I think they will feel happy and it's a good way for people to gain the energy from the music.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 60.0제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，例如“seeing”应为“singing”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意单词拼写和句子连贯性，避免使用无意义的短语如“Forget that”。
예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax after a busy day. Moreover, listening to my favorite music energizes me and makes me feel motivated.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答较完整，但“sing competitions”应为“singing competitions”，句子稍显冗长。建议简化句子结构，并使用更准确的词汇。
예시: Yes, I started learning to sing in primary school and often took part in singing competitions to improve my skills and boost my confidence.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 40.0제안: 回答不完整，缺少原因和细节。建议完整表达观点，并提供具体理由。
예시: If I had to choose, I would sing for my mother because she has always supported me and I want to show my appreciation.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中“see some energetic music”表达不准确，应为“listen to energetic music”。建议使用更准确的表达，并提供具体原因。
예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because listening to energetic music lifts people's spirits and gives them energy.
문법
× I really like singing because I think seeing is a good way for me to relax and I wind up a busy day.
✓ I really like singing because I think singing is a good way for me to relax and wind up a busy day.
这里'seeing'是拼写错误，应该是'singing'。动名词形式用来表示喜欢的动作。
× Actually, I started learning singing when I was in primary school and I often participated in some sing competitions to gain valuable skills and experience because it really makes me confident.
✓ Actually, I started learning singing when I was in primary school and I often participated in some singing competitions to gain valuable skills and experience because it really makes me confident.
'sing competitions'中'sing'应为动名词形式'singing'，表示比赛的类型。
× If you ask me, I guess my choice would be my mother because she.
✓ If you ask me, I guess my choice would be my mother because she loves music.
句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，导致表达不清。需要补充完整句子使其有意义。
× if people see some energetic music, I think they will feel happy and it's a good way for people to gain the energy from the music.
✓ If people listen to some energetic music, I think they will feel happy and it's a good way for people to gain energy from the music.
'see some energetic music'用词不当，音乐应该用'listen to'，而不是'see'。此外，'gain the energy'中'the'不必要，应去掉。
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