Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer and more natural expressions, avoid redundancy, and keep sentences concise. For example, say "I like singing because it improves my vocal cords and helps me relieve stress."

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps improve my vocal cords and relieves my stress, making me feel refreshed.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary. Also, explain briefly how you learned to sing. For example, "Yes, I have learned to sing better by watching vocal training videos on YouTube, which helped me improve my vocal range."

예시: Yes, I have learned how to sing better by watching vocal training videos on YouTube, which helped me improve my vocal range and technique.

제안: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your idea clearly and concisely. For example, "I want to sing for myself because it helps me relieve stress and I really enjoy it."

예시: I want to sing for myself because it helps me relieve stress and I really enjoy doing it.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use simple and clear sentences to express your opinion. For example, "Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it refreshes the mind and acts as a form of exercise that many people enjoy."

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it refreshes the mind and acts as a form of exercise that many people enjoy.

× Yes, most of the time I used to sing a song because singing a song have to improve my vocal cord and it also helps to remove a stress and make a mind phrase.

✓ Yes, most of the time I used to sing songs because singing songs has to improve my vocal cords and it also helps to remove stress and clear the mind.

The sentence has singular and plural mismatches: 'a song' should be plural 'songs' to match the general activity, 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular 'singing a song', 'vocal cord' should be plural 'vocal cords' as humans have more than one, 'a stress' should be 'stress' as it is uncountable, and 'make a mind phrase' is unclear and corrected to 'clear the mind' for meaning.

× Yes, to sang a song in a better version we have to know about our vocals.

✓ Yes, to sing a song in a better version we have to know about our vocals.

The verb 'sang' is the past tense form but here the infinitive 'to sing' is required after 'to'. Using past tense after 'to' is incorrect.

× So I used to learn the vocal codes from these youtubes and from that I enhance my vocals chord.

✓ So I used to learn the vocal cords from these YouTube videos and from that I enhanced my vocal cords.

'vocal codes' is incorrect; it should be 'vocal cords' (plural). 'youtubes' is incorrect; it should be 'YouTube videos'. 'vocals chord' is incorrect; it should be 'vocal cords'. Also, 'enhance' should be past tense 'enhanced' to match 'used to learn'.

× I want to sing for myself because it had to use my stress and singing a song is also one kind of enjoyable things that I love to do most and.

✓ I want to sing for myself because it helps me relieve my stress and singing songs is also one kind of enjoyable thing that I love to do most.

'had to use my stress' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me relieve my stress' for meaning and tense. 'singing a song is also one kind of enjoyable things' has singular/plural mismatch; 'singing songs is also one kind of enjoyable thing' is correct. The sentence was incomplete and corrected for clarity.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to the people because singing is one kind of activities was help.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing is one kind of activity that helps.

'the people' is better as 'people' in general. 'one kind of activities' is incorrect; 'activities' should be singular 'activity' after 'one kind of'. 'was help' is incorrect; corrected to 'that helps'.

× It makes a poor mind fresh and refreshing because singing is also one part of of exercise which people love to do most.

✓ It makes a tired mind fresh and refreshed because singing is also one part of exercise which people love to do most.

'a poor mind' is unclear; 'a tired mind' is more appropriate. 'fresh and refreshing' is redundant; 'fresh and refreshed' is better. 'one part of of exercise' has repeated 'of'; corrected to 'one part of exercise'.