Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态一致性。可以更自然地表达喜欢唱歌的原因。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it gives me a sense of freedom and allows me to express my true feelings. I often sing at home after finishing my schoolwork.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和单复数错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更自然。

예시: Actually, I haven't learned to sing professionally. I have watched some online lessons and taught myself, but I haven't taken lessons from a professional teacher.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达唱歌的对象和原因。

예시: I want to sing for myself because singing is a way to express my emotions and thoughts.

제안: 回答较为自然，但可以增加具体细节和连接词，使表达更连贯丰富。

예시: Of course. I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions, whether they are feeling sad or joyful.

× I like singing very much, and often singing at home after my school work is finished.

✓ I like singing very much, and often sing at home after my school work is finished.

这里的动词应该用原形动词，因为前面已经有了动词like，后面接动词时用动词原形或动名词，但这里的and连接的是两个动词，第二个动词应为原形。

× I like singing because it gave me a it gave me a sense of freedom and I can use my voice to express the true self.

✓ I like singing because it gives me a sense of freedom and I can use my voice to express my true self.

这里时态应保持一致，表达现在喜欢唱歌，所以用一般现在时gives而不是过去时gave。同时，重复了“it gave me a”，应删除重复部分。

× Actually, I haven't learn how to sing professionally.

✓ Actually, I haven't learned how to sing professionally.

现在完成时后面应接过去分词，learn的过去分词是learned。

× but I haven't turned to profession teacher.

✓ but I haven't turned to a professional teacher.

这里需要冠词a修饰单数可数名词teacher，同时professional是形容词，表示“专业的”。

× I want to sing for myself. I think singing is an expression of a human and human can use singing to express their emotions or their thoughts of the songs so.

✓ I want to sing for myself. I think singing is an expression of a human being and humans can use singing to express their emotions or their thoughts about the songs.

human作为可数名词时应使用复数humans，且表达“人类”时常用human being。介词用about更合适。

× I think singing is an expression of a human and human can use singing to express their emotions or their thoughts of the songs so.

✓ I think singing is an expression of a human being and humans can use singing to express their emotions or their thoughts about the songs.

前后主语不一致，human应改为humans，且代词their指代复数humans，保持一致。

× their thoughts of the songs so.

✓ their thoughts about the songs.

表达“对歌曲的想法”时，介词应使用about，而不是of。

× singing is a way for humans to express their emotion, no matter sorrow or happiness.

✓ singing is a way for humans to express their emotions, no matter sorrow or happiness.

emotion应使用复数emotions，因为表达多种情感。