Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“when I say a lot of people will gave me their appreciation”不通顺且时态错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免冗余。

예시: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax. Also, when many people appreciate my singing, it makes me feel happy.

제안: 回答表达基本清晰，但“cannot support that”表达不够自然，且句子衔接略显生硬。建议使用更地道的表达和连接词。

예시: No, I've never taken formal singing lessons because my family couldn't afford it, so I taught myself how to sing.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和断句问题，如“because.”后面断开。建议完整表达原因，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: Actually, I just want to sing for myself because it boosts my confidence and helps me relax.

제안: 回答中“help people less their stress”表达错误，建议使用正确短语如“help people reduce their stress”，并丰富细节。

예시: Yes, definitely. A beautiful song can make a celebration more joyful, and a sad song can help people reduce their stress and feel understood.

× when I say a lot of people will gave me their appreciation, it makes me happy.

✓ when I say a lot of people will give me their appreciation, it makes me happy.

这里的动词时态错误，'will gave'中'gave'是过去式，应该用动词原形'give'，因为情态动词will后面接动词原形。

× No, I've never learned how to sing because my family cannot support that.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing because my family cannot support it.

动词cannot后面需要接宾语，'support that'中的'that'指代不明确，改为'it'更合适。

× Actually, I just want to sing for myself because.

✓ Actually, I just want to sing for myself because it can boost my confidence and help me relax.

句子不完整，'because'后面需要有完整的原因从句，补充完整句子使其语义完整。

× A beautiful song can make an occasion happier and a sad song can help people less their stress.

✓ A beautiful song can make an occasion happier and a sad song can help people reduce their stress.

'less'用法错误，应该用动词'reduce'来表达减少压力的意思。