Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，如"singing loud"应为"singing loudly"，"release my pressure"应为"release my stress"。建议简化句子结构，注意副词使用，并避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress and calm my nerves. Also, singing boosts my confidence, so I enjoy doing it in my free time.

제안: 回答内容完整，但存在语法和表达错误，如"didn't stick up to it"应为"didn't stick with it"，"quit so and quit"重复且不自然。建议使用更准确的短语，避免重复，并保持句子简洁。

예시: Yes, I have. When I was a child, my mother sent me to a singing class, but I didn't stick with it and quit. I regret that decision now.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够流畅，如"satisfying ourselves"应为"to satisfy ourselves"，且"find an outlet"前应保持时态一致。建议调整句子结构，使表达更自然连贯。

예시: I want to sing for myself because I believe the main purpose of singing is to satisfy ourselves in busy daily life and to find an outlet for our emotions.

제안: 回答内容积极，但存在语法错误，如"a effective"应为"an effective"，"get more close"应为"get closer"。建议注意冠词和比较级的正确使用，使表达更准确。

예시: Yes, I do. Music is an effective way to cheer people up, and through singing, we can get closer to each other and strengthen our relationships.

× Yes, I do, because singing loud enables me to release my pressure as well as soothing my tense nerves.

✓ Yes, I do, because singing loudly enables me to release my pressure as well as soothe my tense nerves.

这里“singing loud”中的“loud”应使用副词形式“loudly”，因为修饰动词“singing”。另外，“as well as soothing”前后动词形式应保持一致，改为“as well as soothe”。

× However I didn't stick up to it and quit so and quit, which is very regretful when I recall it now.

✓ However, I didn't stick to it and quit, which is very regretful when I recall it now.

“stick up to”是错误搭配，正确表达是“stick to”，表示坚持。句中“so and quit”重复且多余，应删除。

× I want to sing for myself because I think the most important function of singing is satisfying ourselves in the busy daily life and find an outlet of our emotions.

✓ I want to sing for myself because I think the most important function of singing is satisfying ourselves in busy daily life and finding an outlet for our emotions.

句中“satisfying ourselves”和“find an outlet”应保持并列结构一致，改为“satisfying ourselves... and finding an outlet...”。另外，“in the busy daily life”中“the”不必要，改为“in busy daily life”。

× Yes, I do, because music is a effective way to cheer people up and through singing we can get more close to each other and enhance our relationships.

✓ Yes, I do, because music is an effective way to cheer people up and through singing we can get closer to each other and enhance our relationships.

“a effective”前应使用“an”，因为“effective”以元音音素开头。短语“get more close”应改为“get closer”，使用比较级形式。