Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构有些重复且不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and lifts my mood.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议注意时态和主谓一致，句子结构要完整，同时用更准确的词汇表达观点。

예시: No, I have never learned to sing because my mother is not very supportive. She believes singing is not a reliable career option.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误（seeing应为 singing），句子结构不够清晰。建议注意拼写，简化句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I want to sing for myself because singing is relaxing and makes me happy. If I learn to sing, I will enjoy it personally.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子重复且有语法错误。建议避免重复，使用更准确的表达，并简洁明了地说明原因。

예시: Yes, singing can make people happy because it releases dopamine, which improves their mood.

× Yes, I like singing because when I am singing I feel quite enjoyable and relaxing and I think singing can make me more happy.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I am singing I feel quite happy and relaxed and I think singing can make me happier.

句中使用了形容词 enjoyable 和 relaxing 来描述感受，但应使用形容词 happy 和 relaxed 来表达人的感受，且 more happy 应改为 happier，符合比较级规则。

× No, I never learned how to sing because my mother not very supportive.

✓ No, I never learned how to sing because my mother was not very supportive.

句中缺少过去时态的助动词 was，表示过去状态，需加上 was。

× I go to sing because she thinks singing don't have a good working in the future.

✓ I didn't go to sing because she thinks singing doesn't have good job prospects in the future.

句中 go to sing 用法不当，应使用过去时态的否定形式 didn't go to sing；don't 应改为 doesn't 以符合第三人称单数；have a good working 结构不正确，应改为 have good job prospects。

× I want to sing for myself because I think seeing is a relaxing and which can make me feel happy.

✓ I want to sing for myself because I think singing is relaxing and can make me feel happy.

seeing 应为 singing，且不需要 which，句子结构应简洁，relaxing 前不加冠词。

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because I think when people are singing, music can bring dopamine to them and they can feel enjoy and happy when they are singing.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because I think when people are singing, music can bring dopamine to them and they can feel enjoyment and happiness when they are singing.

feel 后应接名词 enjoyment 和 happiness，而不是动词 enjoy 和形容词 happy。