Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。可以用简单句直接说明不喜欢唱歌的原因，并适当补充细节。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I can't sing accurately. I find it difficult to control my voice, and I think my singing sounds unpleasant.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但有语法错误和重复词汇，建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并用更自然的表达方式说明原因。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I think it's unnecessary, and singing classes are usually expensive, which can be a financial burden.

제안: 回答中语法和表达混乱，建议简化句子结构，明确表达想为谁唱歌及原因，避免语法错误和重复。

예시: I would like to sing for my senior high school classmates because we shared many precious moments together, and singing for them would be very meaningful.

제안: 回答内容较好，但表达不够流畅，建议使用更自然的连接词和准确的词汇，避免重复，丰富细节。

예시: Yes, I definitely agree. Singing can evoke strong emotions like happiness. For example, people often sing at sports events and concerts, which creates a joyful atmosphere.

× I Can't Sing the not very accurately.

✓ I can't sing very accurately.

这里的错误是动词'sing'不应该大写且不需要使用不定式形式，应该用动词原形。动词不定式和现在分词的使用不当导致句子不通顺。

× I can't control my thought very well.

✓ I can't control my thoughts very well.

这里的'thought'应使用复数形式'thoughts'，因为指的是多种想法或思绪。

× And I, it's, it's hard to listen.

✓ And it's hard to listen to me.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和宾语，导致句意不清。应明确表达“别人听我唱歌很难受”。

× Well, I haven't learned how to sing yet because I think it is unnecessary and the the same class often cost a lot of money.

✓ Well, I haven't learned how to sing yet because I think it is unnecessary and the same class often costs a lot of money.

动词'cost'应与主语'the same class'保持第三人称单数一致，使用'costs'。

× Yes, it will bring a economic burden, yeah.

✓ Yes, it will bring an economic burden, yeah.

'economic'以元音音素开头，前面的冠词应使用'an'而非'a'。

× Well, I think the people I want to sing for is what are my Senior High School classmates, given that we have spent a lot of precious time together and and thing for them can is a very meaningful things.

✓ Well, I think the people I want to sing for are my Senior High School classmates, given that we have spent a lot of precious time together and singing for them can be a very meaningful thing.

主语'the people'是复数，谓语动词应使用'are'。'thing for them can is a very meaningful things'结构混乱，应改为'singing for them can be a very meaningful thing'。

× We sing on the sports meeting and we sing on the concert and many, many place.

✓ We sing at the sports meeting and we sing at the concert and many, many places.

'sing'后面搭配的介词应为'at'表示在某个活动或场合。'place'应使用复数'places'。