Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung phù hợp, nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về từ vựng và ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "seeing my favorite song sleeps my mood instantly" không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, when I'm feeling stressed, listening to my favorite song lifts my mood instantly. Additionally, it's a fun way to connect with others during social gatherings.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có cấu trúc tốt và nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như "singing" nhiều lần.

예시: Yes, I have learnt how to sing. When I was in school, I took part in a choir where I received basic vocal training and learned about pitch and rhythm. Moreover, singing has always interested me because it helps me express my emotions.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ như "Singing for them feels special is because" và câu cuối bị thiếu từ. Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và hoàn chỉnh câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

예시: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to perform better. Additionally, sharing music with loved ones creates a warm and joyful atmosphere.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ nghĩa, ví dụ như "Singing aloud individuals to express their emotions" không đúng. Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và làm rõ ý để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. Singing allows individuals to express their emotions and can be very uplifting, especially when done with others in a group or choir.

× For example, when I'm feeling stressed, seeing my favorite song sleeps my mood instantly.

✓ For example, when I'm feeling stressed, singing my favorite song lifts my mood instantly.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'seeing' and 'sleeps' which do not fit the context. 'Singing' is the correct verb in the present participle form to describe the action, and 'lifts' is the correct verb to express improving mood. 'Sleeps' is incorrect here as it does not convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, I have learnt how to sing.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing.

The verb 'learnt' is a British English past tense and past participle form of 'learn'. However, in American English, 'learned' is preferred. Depending on the context, 'learned' is more commonly used in formal writing and speech.

× Singing, as always, interested me because it helps me express emotions.

✓ Singing has always interested me because it helps me express emotions.

The original sentence has awkward word order and tense inconsistency. 'Singing has always interested me' is the correct present perfect tense to express a continuous interest from past to present.

× Singing for them feels special is because they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to perform better.

✓ Singing for them feels special because they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to perform better.

The phrase 'feels special is because' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'feels special because' to connect the feeling with the reason.

× Additionally, sharing music with loved ones creates a warm and joyful.

✓ Additionally, sharing music with loved ones creates a warm and joyful atmosphere.

The sentence is incomplete; 'a warm and joyful' needs a noun to complete the meaning. Adding 'atmosphere' completes the sentence logically.

× Singing aloud individuals to express their emotions and can be very uplifting, especially when done with others in a room or choir.

✓ Singing aloud allows individuals to express their emotions and can be very uplifting, especially when done with others in a room or choir.

The original sentence is missing a verb after 'Singing aloud'. Adding 'allows' correctly connects the subject and predicate, making the sentence grammatically correct.