Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some irrelevant or confusing words like 'Absurdity'. Try to start directly with your opinion and provide clear, specific reasons. Also, avoid grammatical errors and ensure your sentences are coherent and concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. For example, when I was a child, I often sang songs to my parents, which created a joyful atmosphere at home. I believe music has the power to uplift people's spirits.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by correcting grammar and making the sentences more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details about what you learned and how it helped you.

예시: Yes, I have learnt how to sing. When I was in primary school, I took part in a trial where I received basic vocal training and learned about different singing techniques. These lessons helped me improve my confidence and enjoy singing more.

제안: Your answer is good but could be clearer with better grammar and linking words. Try to avoid sentence fragments and ensure your ideas flow logically. Provide specific reasons why singing for them is special.

예시: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because they are very supportive and appreciate my efforts. Singing for them feels special and motivates me to perform better. Moreover, sharing music with loved ones creates a warm and joyful atmosphere.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words. Try to expand your answer with specific reasons or examples to make it more engaging and natural.

예시: Yes, I completely agree that singing can bring happiness to people. It helps individuals feel relaxed and comfortable, reducing stress. For instance, when I sing, it always lifts my mood and makes me feel better.

× Absurdity. Yes. I like singing because it can make me happy.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it can make me happy.

The word 'Absurdity' is out of context and does not fit the sentence structure. Removing it clarifies the response and maintains coherence.

× I for example, I usually sing to my dad and my mom when I a child.

✓ For example, I usually sing to my dad and my mom when I was a child.

The phrase 'I for example' is incorrectly ordered; 'For example' should start the sentence. Also, the preposition 'to' is correct here, but the sentence is missing the verb 'was' before 'a child' to indicate past tense.

× I usually sing to my dad and my mom when I a child.

✓ I usually sang to my dad and my mom when I was a child.

The action refers to a past time ('when I was a child'), so the verb 'sing' should be in the past tense 'sang', and the verb 'was' is needed before 'a child' to complete the sentence.

× When I was in primary school, I took part in a trial where I received basic vocal training and learn about some information and knowledge about singing.

✓ When I was in primary school, I took part in a trial where I received basic vocal training and learned some information and knowledge about singing.

The verb 'learn' should be in the past tense 'learned' to match the past context of the sentence.

× Singing lessons help me improve my confidence and enjoy.

✓ Singing lessons help me improve my confidence and enjoy myself.

The verb 'enjoy' requires an object or reflexive pronoun here. Adding 'myself' completes the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Singing for them feel special because they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to perform better.

✓ Singing for them feels special because they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to perform better.

The subject 'Singing' is singular, so the verb should be 'feels' instead of 'feel' to agree in number.

× Additionally, sharing musical with loved people, creating a warm and joyful attitude.

✓ Additionally, sharing music with loved ones creates a warm and joyful atmosphere.

The phrase 'sharing musical with loved people' is incorrect; 'music' is the correct noun, and 'loved ones' is the proper expression. Also, the sentence lacked a main verb; 'creates' completes the sentence meaningfully. 'Attitude' is replaced with 'atmosphere' to better fit the context.

× Yes, I totally agree this idea.

✓ Yes, I totally agree with this idea.

The verb 'agree' requires the preposition 'with' before the object. Adding 'with' corrects the sentence.