Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ý nghĩa, nhưng câu cuối bị bỏ dở và thiếu sự liên kết rõ ràng. Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I'm really into singing because it helps me express my emotions and relieve stress after a busy day. For example, on weekends, my family usually goes to karaoke, and we enjoy singing together, which strengthens our bond.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt cho tự nhiên hơn. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng từ nối để câu văn mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was younger. My teacher taught me singing techniques along with clapping and playing instruments, which helped me relieve stress and improve my mood.

제안: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên hoàn thiện ý tưởng, tránh lỗi và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Well, I would like to sing for my family because it helps strengthen the bond between me, my sisters, and my elder brother. Moreover, singing together improves our mood and creates happy memories.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng các cụm từ chính xác và hoàn chỉnh câu trả lời. Sử dụng từ nối để làm rõ ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp sẽ giúp câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Absolutely. I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to relax and escape from the hustle and bustle of life. For example, my family often sings together, which makes us feel joyful and connected.

× At weekends my family usually go to karaoke to sing and.

✓ At weekends my family usually goes to karaoke to sing.

The subject 'my family' is singular, so the verb should be 'goes' instead of 'go'. In English, collective nouns like 'family' are treated as singular when referring to the group as a whole.

× My teacher taught me to how to sing with a clapping and play instrument because it helps me to relieve stress and improve mood after a busy day.

✓ My teacher taught me how to sing with clapping and play instruments because it helps me relieve stress and improve my mood after a busy day.

The phrase 'to how to sing' is incorrect; it should be 'how to sing'. Also, 'a clapping' is incorrect because 'clapping' is a noun here and should not have an article. 'Play instrument' should be plural 'play instruments' to match the context. Additionally, 'improve mood' needs a possessive adjective 'my mood' for clarity.

× Well, I would like to sing for my family because it could do wonders for bonding with Maya sisters and elder brother.

✓ Well, I would like to sing for my family because it could do wonders for bonding with my sisters Maya and elder brother.

The phrase 'Maya sisters' is unclear and likely missing a possessive pronoun 'my' before 'sisters'. Also, 'Maya' seems to be a name and should be placed correctly. The sentence needs to clarify the relationship by adding 'my' and rearranging the words.

× Moreover, it helps me to improve mood and build.

✓ Moreover, it helps me improve my mood and build relationships.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'build'. Adding 'relationships' completes the thought. Also, 'improve mood' should be 'improve my mood' for clarity.

× I suppose that singing is the way to make people happy because it helps me to let our head down and escape from the hustle and bustle of the life.

✓ I suppose that singing is a way to make people happy because it helps me to let my head down and escape from the hustle and bustle of life.

The pronouns 'me' and 'our' are inconsistent; 'me' is first person singular, while 'our' is first person plural. They should be consistent. Also, 'the life' is incorrect; it should be 'life' without 'the'.