Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和用词有些错误，且句子较长，建议简化句子结构，注意时态一致，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax after a busy day. Also, singing with my family or friends creates a fun and joyful atmosphere.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和冠词使用不当，表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并简洁明了地说明原因。

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing because I think it's a professional skill and not very useful for my life.

제안: 回答中存在人称错误和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议注意人称代词的一致性，改进句子结构，使表达更准确。

예시: I want to sing for my mother because she has always supported me and loves music. She is also a big fan of mine.

제안: 回答中表达不够连贯，部分用词不准确。建议使用更自然的表达，增加连接词，使句子更流畅。

예시: Actually, I think singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when you feel sad, listening to cheerful music can help you relax and forget your worries.

× I really enjoy singing because it made me feel relaxing especially after a busy day and it also provide a very funny atmosphere when you sing with your family or friends.

✓ I really enjoy singing because it makes me feel relaxed especially after a busy day and it also provides a very fun atmosphere when you sing with your family or friends.

句子中“made”使用了过去时，但前半句是现在时态“enjoy”，时态不一致，应使用一般现在时“makes”。“provide”缺少第三人称单数的-s，应改为“provides”。此外，“feel relaxing”应改为“feel relaxed”，因为“relaxing”是形容词，表示使人放松的，而这里应表达“感到放松”的状态。

× No, I never learn how to sing because I think it's very professional thing and it's not very helpful for my life, so I never do things like that.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I think it's a very professional thing and it's not very helpful for my life, so I never do things like that.

“never learn”时态错误，表示过去到现在的经历应使用现在完成时“have never learned”。“professional thing”前缺少冠词，应加“a”。

× I want to sing for my mother because she has always support me and like me, he always have a lot of interest for the music and she's really a big fans for me.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because she has always supported me and liked me, she always has a lot of interest in music and she's really a big fan of me.

“has always support”缺少过去分词，应为“has always supported”。“like me”时态应与前文一致，改为“liked me”。“he”应为“she”，指代母亲。动词“have”应为第三人称单数“has”。“interest for the music”搭配错误，应为“interest in music”。“fans”应为单数“fan”，因为指的是“a big fan”。

× Actually I think singing can bring happiness to people. Imagine that you are very sad or something. You can hear happy atmosphere music and it makes me feel relaxing and don't think other.

✓ Actually, I think singing can bring happiness to people. Imagine that you are very sad or something. You can hear happy, atmospheric music and it makes me feel relaxed and not think about other things.

“happy atmosphere music”表达不自然，应改为“happy, atmospheric music”。“feel relaxing”应为“feel relaxed”，表示感受状态。短语“don't think other”不完整，应改为“not think about other things”，使表达完整且正确。