Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
I would like to sing because you know, from a busy day at work, from the, you know, after working from the hustle and bustle and keep grinding on my, keep grinding on my, you know, futures or something. I would like to disconnect myself from those busy daily works.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
Umm, not really, I think. Umm, I, I didn't, you know, take the professional classes, like those courses that teach you how to sing. Umm, basically I, I just learned by myself.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
Well there are many person I would like to see for especially for my relatives like my mom and dad. I think when I was saying to them I feel quite happiness and harmonious and for them they will feel relax at the same time.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Yeah, definitely. For me, I think, you know, singing is such quite such a meditate, such a therapeutic way to relax, relax myself and disconnect from the pressure and anxious.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 60.0제안: 你的回答中有较多重复和口头语，影响了表达的流畅性。建议减少重复，避免使用“you know”等填充词，回答时结构更清晰，表达更自然。
예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and forget the stress from a busy day at work.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中有较多犹豫和重复，影响表达的自然性。建议减少犹豫词，直接回答问题，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。
예시: No, I haven't taken any professional singing classes, but I have learned to sing by myself through practice.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议注意主谓一致，使用正确的时态和词汇，句子结构更完整，表达更具体。
예시: I would like to sing for my parents and other relatives because it makes me happy and I believe it helps them feel relaxed too.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中有重复和不准确的词汇，影响表达效果。建议使用准确的词汇，避免重复，句子结构更清晰，表达更自然。
예시: Yes, definitely. Singing is a very therapeutic activity that helps me relax and relieve stress and anxiety.
문법
× Well there are many person I would like to see for especially for my relatives like my mom and dad.
✓ Well there are many people I would like to sing for, especially my relatives like my mom and dad.
这里的 'person' 是单数形式，但前面用了 'many'，表示复数，应该用复数形式 'people'。此外，'see for' 应改为 'sing for'，符合上下文语义。
× I think when I was saying to them I feel quite happiness and harmonious and for them they will feel relax at the same time.
✓ I think when I sing to them, I feel quite happy and harmonious, and they will feel relaxed at the same time.
'happiness' 是名词，句中需要形容词 'happy' 来描述感受；'relax' 是动词，句中应使用形容词 'relaxed' 来描述状态。
× For me, I think, you know, singing is such quite such a meditate, such a therapeutic way to relax, relax myself and disconnect from the pressure and anxious.
✓ For me, I think singing is quite a meditative, therapeutic way to relax myself and disconnect from pressure and anxiety.
'meditate' 是动词，句中需要形容词 'meditative' 来修饰 'way'；'anxious' 是形容词，句中应使用名词 'anxiety' 来表示压力和焦虑的状态。
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