Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and expressing your feelings directly. For example, say "I like singing because it helps me feel calm when I am unhappy and boosts my confidence." Avoid confusing phrases like "won't let me feel confident besides."

예시: I like singing because it helps me feel calm when I am unhappy and boosts my confidence.

제안: Your answer is unclear and does not directly respond to the question. You should answer the question directly and provide a simple explanation. For example, "No, I have never taken singing lessons because I usually spend my time using my phone."

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I usually spend my time using my phone.

제안: Your answer does not address the question properly. The question asks who you want to sing for, but you talk about the type of songs you like. Try to answer directly and clearly, for example, "I want to sing for my friends and family because I enjoy sharing music with them."

예시: I want to sing for my friends and family because I enjoy sharing music with them.

제안: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by using better grammar and linking words. For example, "Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is a great hobby and it always makes the atmosphere lively."

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is a great hobby and it always makes the atmosphere lively.

× Yes, I think it's because singing won't let me feel confident besides and let me feel calm when I am unhappy and not worth.

✓ Yes, I think it's because singing not only makes me feel confident but also helps me feel calm when I am unhappy and worthless.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'besides' and 'and' to connect ideas. The correct conjunction structure for adding related ideas is 'not only... but also'. Additionally, 'won't let me feel confident' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me feel confident'. 'Not worth' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'worthless'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I usually see myself with using phone.

✓ No, I usually see myself using my phone.

The phrase 'with using phone' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'see myself using my phone'. The preposition 'with' is unnecessary here, and 'phone' should be preceded by a possessive pronoun 'my' to specify ownership.

× I interest to sing the song that the type of rap and hip hop it is a cool for me.

✓ I am interested in singing songs of the rap and hip hop type because they are cool to me.

The original sentence misuses 'I interest to sing' which should be 'I am interested in singing'. Also, 'the song that the type of rap and hip hop it is a cool for me' is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence uses proper verb forms and prepositions to express interest and preference clearly.

× Yes it is because singing is a is a great hobby and always make the atmosphere in the place active.

✓ Yes, it is because singing is a great hobby and always makes the atmosphere in the place lively.

The sentence has a repeated 'is a' and subject-verb agreement error with 'make' instead of 'makes'. Also, 'active' is not the best adjective to describe atmosphere; 'lively' is more appropriate. The correction fixes these issues and improves sentence flow.