Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
I like singing very much when I was a child I always sing in the school and at home and I do think that singing can help me to be happy and help me to umm do many things and my friends love singing.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
No, I haven't. I just listened to the radio or listen to the tape and follow them. Uh, and I think, uh, everybody can learn to sing by themselves and it is an easy way to sing the songs well and that is really.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
I want to sing for my parents, for my son and for my friends. And I love them and they love me too. And I can sing well, I think, and I can sing for them and make them happy. I think it's the most important thing that I want.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Yes, I do think swimming can bring happiness to all of us. When you are sad or when you are very nervous, you can listen to the tape or listen to the music. Then you can be relaxed and calm down and you will be happy.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答时时态混乱，应该统一使用现在时或过去时，且句子较长且缺少连贯的连接词，建议简化句子结构，使用适当的连接词，使表达更自然流畅。
예시: Yes, I like singing very much. When I was a child, I often sang at school and at home. I believe singing makes me happy and helps me relax. Also, my friends enjoy singing too.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，且表达不够连贯，建议注意动词时态一致，避免口头语，使用连接词使句子更流畅。
예시: No, I haven't learned singing formally. I usually listen to the radio or tapes and try to imitate the songs. I believe anyone can learn to sing by themselves if they practice regularly.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答内容重复且缺少连贯性，建议使用连接词连接句子，避免重复表达，同时丰富细节使回答更具体。
예시: I want to sing for my parents, my son, and my friends because I love them. Singing for them makes me happy, and I hope my singing can bring joy to them as well.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 45.0제안: 回答中出现了词汇错误（将'singing'误说成'swimming'），且表达不够准确，建议注意词汇准确性，使用具体例子支持观点，并保持句子连贯。
예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when someone feels sad or nervous, listening to or singing songs can help them relax and feel better.
문법
× I like singing very much when I was a child I always sing in the school and at home and I do think that singing can help me to be happy and help me to umm do many things and my friends love singing.
✓ I liked singing very much when I was a child. I always sang in the school and at home, and I do think that singing can help me to be happy and help me to umm do many things, and my friends love singing.
句子中描述过去的习惯动作时，动词应使用过去式。'like'应改为'liked'，'sing'应改为'sang'，以符合过去时态的表达。
× No, I haven't. I just listened to the radio or listen to the tape and follow them.
✓ No, I haven't. I just listened to the radio or listened to the tape and followed them.
句子中并列的动词应保持时态一致，且在描述过去动作时应使用过去式。'listen'和'follow'应改为'listened'和'followed'。
× Yes, I do think swimming can bring happiness to all of us.
✓ Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness to all of us.
此处原句中提到的是唱歌(singing)，但误用了'swimming'（游泳），应改为'singing'以符合上下文。
× When you are sad or when you are very nervous, you can listen to the tape or listen to the music.
✓ When you are sad or when you are very nervous, you can listen to the tape or listen to music.
'listen to music'是固定搭配，通常不加定冠词'the'，因此应去掉'the'。
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