Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally good but contains a repetition error ('Sing Singing'). Also, try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and relieve stress. Moreover, singing with my friends improves my mood and boosts my confidence.

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words to connect your points and by correcting minor grammar issues (e.g., 'singing competition' should be plural or preceded by 'a').

예시: Yes, I learnt how to sing when I was young by taking singing classes. Additionally, I enjoy singing as a hobby and practice regularly. I have also participated in a local singing competition.

제안: Your answer is good and relevant. To improve, you can add a linking word to connect your ideas and provide a bit more detail to enrich your response.

예시: I want to sing for my family members because they have always supported and guided me. Therefore, I feel comfortable and relaxed when singing in front of them.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrasing ('Although singing can create of community'). Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to express your ideas clearly and coherently.

예시: Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because it is a great way to express emotions and relieve stress. Moreover, it helps create a sense of community and belonging among people.

× Sing Singing helps improve my mood and boost my confidence.

✓ Singing helps improve my mood and boost my confidence.

The phrase 'Sing Singing' is a repetition error causing sentence structure issues. Removing the extra 'Sing' corrects the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× I also participated in local singing competition.

✓ I also participated in a local singing competition.

The noun 'competition' is singular and requires an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct. Without the article, the sentence is incomplete.

× Although singing can create of community and belonging.

✓ Although singing can create a sense of community and belonging.

The phrase 'create of community' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'create a sense of community'. The preposition 'of' should follow 'sense', not 'create'.