Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，如“go to the bathroom and singing”应为“go to the bathroom and sing”。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing very much. Every day, I like to sing in the bathroom because it helps me relax and express my feelings. Also, singing is free, so it's a convenient way to unwind.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“parents doesn't”应为“parents don't”，“learned about sing”应为“learned how to sing”。建议加强语法基础，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing formally because my parents think it would take too much time away from my studies. Also, our school doesn't offer music classes.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多，如“introvert people”应为“an introverted person”，“think for myself”应为“sing for myself”，“see for myself”应为“sing for myself”。建议加强词汇准确性和句子连贯性。

예시: I am quite an introverted person, so I prefer to sing only for myself. I like to have privacy and I worry that others might laugh at me.

제안: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，句子结构不够清晰。建议注意词汇准确性，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Well, it depends. For most people like me, singing allows us to express our feelings, whether we are happy or angry. This kind of expression helps us relax and can bring happiness.

× Every day I go to the bathroom and singing and I think singing is quite a good way to relax myself and express my feeling and because I don't have to pay anything to sing.

✓ Every day I go to the bathroom and sing, and I think singing is quite a good way to relax myself and express my feelings because I don't have to pay anything to sing.

动词go后面应接动词原形或动词不定式，这里应使用动词原形'sing'而非动名词'singing'。另外，'express my feeling'应为复数形式'express my feelings'，因为表达的是多种感受。

× Well actually no, because my parents doesn't want me to waste a lot of time in singing and in the school we focus manually on our studies so we don't have a music class.

✓ Well actually no, because my parents don't want me to waste a lot of time singing, and at school we focus mainly on our studies so we don't have a music class.

主语是复数'parents'，谓语动词应使用复数形式'don't'而非'doesn't'。此外，'in singing'应改为'singing'，'in the school'应改为'at school'，'manually'应为'mainly'。

× Well actually no, because my parents doesn't want me to waste a lot of time in singing and in the school we focus manually on our studies so we don't have a music class.

✓ Well actually no, because my parents don't want me to waste a lot of time singing, and at school we focus mainly on our studies so we don't have a music class.

动词'waste'后面接动名词形式'singing'，而不是介词短语'in singing'。

× So I I had I have not ever learned about sing.

✓ So I have never learned how to sing.

'have not ever learned'表达不自然，改为'have never learned'更地道；'about sing'应改为'how to sing'，因为学习唱歌用'learn how to sing'。

× Well, actually I'm quite introvert people, so I would like to think for myself because I want some privacy and I didn't, I don't think well.

✓ Well, actually I'm quite an introverted person, so I would like to think for myself because I want some privacy and I don't think well.

'I'm'是单数，后面应接单数名词'an introverted person'，而不是复数'people'。另外，'didn't, I don't think well'语义不清，去掉'didn't'更合适。

× So I don't want to let others to laugh at me.

✓ So I don't want to let others laugh at me.

动词'let'后面直接接动词原形，不能加'to'，所以应为'let others laugh'。

× So I will only see for myself.

✓ So I will only sing for myself.

'see for myself'不符合语境，应为'sing for myself'，表达为“我只为自己唱歌”。

× For most people like me, seeing can let us express our feelings, whether happy or angry.

✓ For most people like me, singing can let us express our feelings, whether happy or angry.

'seeing'应为'singing'，因为主题是唱歌。

× And so that this kind of expression can help us to relax ourselves so you can bring happiness to us.

✓ And so this kind of expression can help us relax ourselves, so it can bring happiness to us.

句子中'you can bring happiness to us'主语不明确，应改为'it can bring happiness to us'，指代前面的表达。