Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构有些不自然，且表达略显重复。建议使用更自然流畅的表达方式，并避免重复，比如用更准确的词汇描述“find myself”和“show my confidence”。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and boosts my confidence when I perform in front of others.

제안: 回答中信息较多但表达不够连贯，句子较长且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意语法准确。

예시: Actually, I have learned singing mainly through online videos on YouTube and Instagram because it's more affordable and I can watch the lessons repeatedly.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误。建议使用更简洁的句子，并注意冠词和词汇的正确使用。

예시: I don't have a specific group to sing for; I enjoy singing for everyone, including my family, friends, and even my idols.

제안: 回答中表达了观点，但句子结构混乱，部分表达不清晰。建议分成两句，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并用更准确的词汇描述感受。

예시: Yes, definitely. Singing is magical because the lyrics can resonate with people, and the rhythm and harmony can evoke different emotions.

× I love singing very much because I think singing can let me find myself, like I can show my confidence aspect to other people.

✓ I love singing very much because I think singing can help me find myself, like I can show my confident side to other people.

这里'singing'作为动名词使用是正确的，但'confidence aspect'表达不自然，应改为'confident side'更符合英语习惯。

× To be honest, I just learned it from the Internet like YouTube or Instagram views because I think the price of it is more affordable because they're saying lesson is quite expensive and I can repeat the lesson always.

✓ To be honest, I just learned it from the Internet like YouTube or Instagram videos because I think the price of it is more affordable since they say lessons are quite expensive and I can always repeat the lessons.

'views'应为'videos'，'they're saying'应为'they say'，'lesson is'应为'lessons are'，时态和单复数需保持一致。

× I think I don't have some especially group I want to sing for because I love singing so I can sing for all the people like my family, my friends or even my idols.

✓ I think I don't have any special group I want to sing for because I love singing so I can sing for all the people like my family, my friends or even my idols.

'some especially group'表达错误，应为'any special group'，'especially'应为形容词'special'，且量词使用不当。

× Yes, absolutely, because I think singing is a very magical like the lyrics of the song can make people resonate with it, and the rhythm and the harmony of their song can also let people feel difference.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because I think singing is very magical. The lyrics of the song can make people resonate with it, and the rhythm and harmony of the song can also let people feel different.

'a very magical like'结构错误，应拆分为两句；'their song'应为'the song'；'feel difference'应为'feel different'，形容词用法错误。