Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah jelas dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan, tetapi terasa terlalu singkat dan kurang detail. Cobalah untuk menambahkan alasan yang lebih spesifik atau pengalaman pribadi untuk membuat jawaban lebih menarik dan alami.

예시: No, I don't like singing because my voice is not very pleasant. For example, I often feel shy to sing in front of others because I worry they might not enjoy it.

제안: Jawaban Anda terlalu singkat dan kurang memberikan informasi tambahan. Sebaiknya tambahkan sedikit penjelasan atau alasan untuk memperkaya jawaban dan menunjukkan kemampuan berbahasa yang lebih baik.

예시: No, I have never learnt how to sing formally, but I sometimes try to sing along with my favorite songs at home.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah tepat dan relevan, namun akan lebih baik jika Anda menambahkan alasan atau perasaan terkait keinginan tersebut agar jawaban lebih lengkap dan alami.

예시: I want to sing for my boyfriend because I think it would make him happy and show how much I care about him.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang lengkap dan ada bagian yang tidak jelas. Cobalah untuk menyusun kalimat yang lengkap dan menjelaskan alasan mengapa bernyanyi bisa membawa kebahagiaan, serta gunakan kata penghubung agar jawaban lebih koheren.

예시: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it helps me relax and express my emotions, which makes me feel joyful and less stressed.

× Because make me feel *****.

✓ Because it makes me feel *****.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a subject and proper verb form. Adding 'it' as the subject and changing 'make' to 'makes' corrects the sentence structure and subject-verb agreement.

× Because make me feel *****.

✓ Because it makes me feel *****.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.