Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复表达，语言更自然流畅。可以简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时增加连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and express my emotions. For example, I often sing karaoke with my friends, which is a fun and relaxing activity.

제안: 回答可以更具体，使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免模糊表达，如“maybe”。

예시: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I learn by listening to songs repeatedly and imitating the singers, which helps me improve my skills gradually.

제안: 回答中出现了错误词汇（ceiling应为singing），需要注意用词准确。句子结构应更清晰，避免模糊词汇如“maybe”。

예시: I want to sing for my family and close friends because they have always supported me, and singing is my way to show gratitude to them.

제안: 回答中多次出现拼写错误（saving, seeing），影响表达清晰度。应注意用词准确，句子完整，避免重复和不完整的句子。

예시: I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress. Moreover, it can spread kindness and joy to others.

× And especially I love sitting during the karaoke sessions with my friend, and I think that's a good way.

✓ And especially I love sitting during the karaoke sessions with my friends, and I think that's a good way.

这里的 friend 应该用复数形式 friends，因为通常卡拉OK是和多个朋友一起进行的，且前文语境暗示是复数。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

learn 的过去分词在美式英语中通常用 learned，learnt 是英式英语形式。根据语境和习惯，建议使用 learned。

× Well, maybe I want to sing for the people who I love and people who love me.

✓ Well, maybe I want to sing for the people whom I love and people who love me.

关系代词用法错误，who 用于主格，宾格应使用 whom，表示“我爱的人”。

× I'm just like my friend or my families and my relatives because I think they are the biggest supporters in my life.

✓ I'm just like my friends or my family and my relatives because I think they are the biggest supporters in my life.

family 是不可数名词，复数形式是 family（集合名词），而 families 指多个家庭，不符合语境。friend 应用复数 friends。

× So that maybe I will use the ceiling as a way to express my gratitude.

✓ So maybe I will use the singing as a way to express my gratitude.

ceiling 是“天花板”，应为 singing（唱歌），是拼写错误导致的代词使用错误。

× From my point of view, I believe that saving can bring happiness to people because I think seeing is a good way to express our emotions and relieve stress, and also it's a good way to pass the kindness to others.

✓ From my point of view, I believe that singing can bring happiness to people because I think singing is a good way to express our emotions and relieve stress, and also it's a good way to pass kindness to others.

saving 和 seeing 是拼写错误，应为 singing。kindness 前不需要加定冠词 the。

× So I think singing is a good way and that's a good way to make people.

✓ So I think singing is a good way and that's a good way to make people happy.

句子不完整，缺少宾语 happy，导致表达不清晰。