Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，直接表达喜欢或不喜欢唱歌的原因，并注意时态和动词形式的正确使用。

예시: I don't like singing because I never took singing lessons when I was young, so I find it hard to hold a tune. Instead, I prefer listening to music because it helps me relax.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议使用完整的句子，正确使用时态，并且避免重复。可以简洁地说明没有学过唱歌，但学过吉他并发现自己不擅长。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing. However, I took guitar lessons for a few months when I was young, but I realized I don't have much talent in music.

제안: 回答表达了情感，但有语法和用词错误，且部分句子不连贯。建议简化表达，使用连贯的句子，明确表达想为家人唱歌的原因。

예시: I want to sing for my family because they always support me. Singing for them would be a way to show my appreciation and bring us closer together.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，且表达不够自然。建议避免重复，正确使用代词，并且更自然地表达观点。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. For example, I have followed Don Ziqi for a long time. She is a famous singer worldwide, and her relaxing music makes people feel happy and emotional.

× I'm not fond of saying I prefer to listening to use music because I haven't.

✓ I'm not fond of singing; I prefer listening to music because I haven't.

这里动词短语结构错误，'fond of'后应接动名词形式，'prefer to listening'应改为'prefer listening'。建议熟悉动词后接动名词或不定式的用法。

× I haven't attend any musical treat lessons when I was young so I cannot hold the tune for for long and it's more relaxing to listening to music.

✓ I haven't attended any musical treat lessons when I was young, so I cannot hold the tune for long, and it's more relaxing to listen to music.

'haven't attend'时态错误，应为现在完成时的过去分词'attended'。'to listening'应为不定式'to listen'。注意动词时态和不定式的正确使用。

× No, I haven't learn to sing.

✓ No, I haven't learned to sing.

现在完成时中，动词应使用过去分词形式，'learn'应改为'learned'。

× But when I was young I I went to the guitar lessons and studied for several months and found that I'm not.

✓ But when I was young, I went to guitar lessons and studied for several months and found that I'm not talented.

句子末尾不完整，缺少形容词'talented'，使句子完整。

× I have not the talent in music.

✓ I do not have the talent in music.

'have not'用法不当，否定句应使用助动词'do not have'。

× I can't hold the tour or play it well.

✓ I can't hold the tune or play it well.

单词'tour'错误，应为'tune'，表示音调。

× I want to sing for my family, uh, because they're the ones who always stand behind me and support me for all the time and I appreciate them for their kindness.

✓ I want to sing for my family because they're the ones who always stand behind me and support me all the time, and I appreciate their kindness.

'for all the time'用法错误，应为'all the time'。'appreciate them for their kindness'应简化为'appreciate their kindness'。

× I would like to sing to them in order to get us get our spirit all together again.

✓ I would like to sing to them in order to get our spirits all together again.

句子中重复使用'get'，且'get us get our spirit'结构不正确，应简化为'get our spirits all together'。

× She is a famous singer in the worldwide.

✓ She is a famous singer worldwide.

'in the worldwide'用法错误，'worldwide'本身为副词或形容词，不需冠词和介词。

× His music is relaxing and can bring happiness to people and their their emotional.

✓ Her music is relaxing and can bring happiness to people and their emotions.

'His'应为'Her'，因为前文提到的是女性歌手。'their their emotional'重复且用词错误，应为'their emotions'。