Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some repetition and minor errors. Try to avoid repeating words like 'to' and 'amuse' twice. Also, make your sentences more concise and natural by combining ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I'm alone at home and it amuses me.

제안: Your answer has good content but some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb tenses and plural forms, and try to link your ideas more naturally.

예시: Yes, I have learned to sing from my brother, who is a singer. He often teaches me songs at home and shows me how to sing them properly.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and does not directly answer the question. Try to respond clearly to who you want to sing for, and then add details if needed. Avoid incomplete sentences.

예시: I usually like to sing songs from Hindi and Nepali movies for my family and friends.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but contains repetition and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because singing with friends or family is enjoyable and helps reduce stress.

× Yes, I like singing because sometimes it's very nice to sing a song at home alone, to feel relaxed and to to amu to amuse yourself.

✓ Yes, I like singing because sometimes it's very nice to sing a song at home alone, to feel relaxed and to amuse yourself.

The phrase 'to to amu to amuse yourself' contains repeated and incorrect words. The correct form is 'to amuse yourself' using the infinitive verb form after 'to'. This corrects the verb form and removes redundancy.

× He sings a lot of song and also he has teach me some songs to sing in a proper way.

✓ He sings a lot of songs and also he has taught me some songs to sing in a proper way.

The word 'song' should be plural 'songs' because it refers to multiple songs. Also, 'has teach' is incorrect; the past participle 'taught' should be used after 'has'.

× He sings a lot of song and also he has teach me some songs to sing in a proper way.

✓ He sings a lot of songs and also he has taught me some songs to sing in a proper way.

The verb 'teach' needs to be in the past participle form 'taught' after the auxiliary verb 'has' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× Usually I prefer a song from movies like Hindi movies, Nepali movies and.

✓ Usually I prefer songs from movies like Hindi movies and Nepali movies.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'A song' should be plural 'songs' to match the general preference, and the conjunction 'and' should connect only two items without a trailing 'and' at the end.

× Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because singing with friends or family is really amusing and it's really beneficial for them to ease their stress and get it, get it. Singing it gives to to become stressless.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because singing with friends or family is really amusing and it's really beneficial for them to ease their stress and feel relaxed. Singing helps to reduce stress.

The original sentence has repetition ('get it, get it'), awkward phrasing ('Singing it gives to to become stressless'), and unclear meaning. The correction removes repetition, clarifies meaning, and uses appropriate expressions to convey stress relief.