Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，内容较丰富，但可以更自然流畅，避免重复表达“express my emotions”。建议使用更多连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because I often listen to pop music, which inspires me to sing along. Moreover, singing helps me relax and express my feelings, especially when I'm happy or stressed.

제안: 回答结构清晰，内容具体且连贯，但部分句子较长，建议适当简化句子结构，使表达更自然。

예시: I have never learned to sing professionally because I focus on other subjects. However, singing is my favorite hobby. I often sing to relax after a busy day, whether I'm alone or with friends.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I'm a shy people”应为“I'm a shy person”，且表达不够自然。建议注意语法和用词准确，避免口语填充词。

예시: I prefer to sing just for myself because I am a shy person. Singing in front of others makes me feel embarrassed, so I enjoy it privately as it makes me happy.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构重复且有语法错误，如“bring many sadness”应为“bring a lot of sadness”。建议使用更准确的表达和丰富的词汇。

예시: I believe singing can bring different emotions to people. It often brings happiness, but if the song is sad, it can also evoke feelings of sadness.

× I just want to sing for myself because umm, I'm a shy people.

✓ I just want to sing for myself because umm, I'm a shy person.

people 是复数形式，表示“人们”，而这里需要单数形式来指代“一个害羞的人”，所以应使用 person。

× I don't want this thing for others.

✓ I don't want this for others.

这里的 this thing 用法不自然，且多余，直接用 this 更简洁且符合英语习惯。

× I think it's very embarrassed.

✓ I think it's very embarrassing.

embarrassed 是形容人的情绪，表示“感到尴尬的”，而这里需要形容事物的性质，应该用形容词 embarrassing，表示“令人尴尬的”。

× Well, I think it really depends because singing can bring happiness and both it can bring sadness to people.

✓ Well, I think it really depends because singing can bring happiness and also it can bring sadness to people.

句中 both 用法错误，both 通常用于连接两个并列名词或短语，这里应使用 also 来连接两个动词短语。

× If the song is sad, it may bring many sadness to people.

✓ If the song is sad, it may bring much sadness to people.

sadness 是不可数名词，前面不能用 many，应该用 much 来修饰不可数名词。