Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: I don't enjoy singing much because I'm not good at it, but I love listening to various music genres like pop, Afrobeat, and jazz.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，建议使用正确的时态和简洁表达，同时增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing in music classes during primary school, and this continued when I attended junior high school.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议先明确回答问题，再用具体细节支持，避免语法错误。

예시: If I were good at singing, I would like to perform for an audience on stage because singing helps me relax.

제안: 回答内容丰富，但语法和时态使用不准确，建议注意时态一致性，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, singing definitely brings happiness, especially during festivals when we sing and dance around a bonfire, which is a traditional practice in my region.

× I'm not a big fan of singing 'cause I'm bad at, but I'm huge fan of music.

✓ I'm not a big fan of singing 'cause I'm bad at it, but I'm a huge fan of music.

这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“fan”是可数名词，单数形式前需要加冠词。

× I listen all kinds of music like pop, Afro, jazz, even though I don't sing as well as much but I love music.

✓ I listen to all kinds of music like pop, Afro, jazz, even though I don't sing very well, but I love music.

“listen”后面需要加介词“to”，表示“听某物”；“as well as much”表达不正确，改为“very well”更合适。

× Yes, of course, when I was in primary school, we have special course course called music class and so in that case everyone learned how to sing as well when we went to junior high school.

✓ Yes, of course, when I was in primary school, we had a special course called music class, and in that case, everyone learned how to sing as well when we went to junior high school.

描述过去的事情，动词“have”应使用过去式“had”；“course course”重复，应去掉一个。

× I would like to thank for everyone like on the stage giving a performance if I very good at singing cause singing is like a relaxation for me.

✓ I would like to thank everyone on the stage giving a performance if I were very good at singing, because singing is like a relaxation for me.

“thank for everyone”应为“thank everyone”；虚拟语气中“if I very good”应为“if I were very good”；“cause”应为“because”更正式。

× Yes, for sure, singing definitely can bring happiness to people, especially when we celebrating certain festival, we sing together and dancing together around the bonfire which is very traditional in our region.

✓ Yes, for sure, singing definitely can bring happiness to people, especially when we are celebrating certain festivals, we sing together and dance together around the bonfire which is very traditional in our region.

“when we celebrating”缺少助动词，应为“when we are celebrating”；“dancing”应与前面的“sing”保持一致，改为“dance”；“festival”应为复数“festivals”。